I just read your wee tale, The Lie. What a precious image at the beginning of the story.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about the magic of Christmas will love this heartwarming, eye blurring tale.
WHAT I LIKED:How the father patiently explained about Santa to his son.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:It blurred my eyes in a good way.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
POINT OF VIEW:I know who's point of view I’m in.
FLOW:This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though:Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
APPEAL:Those who like to read about love will find this interesting.
WHAT I LIKED:All the different shades of red you used.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
FLOW:This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though:Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
I just read your wee poem, The Sea Is A Wonder Forever.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about the sea and its mysterious will like this.
WHAT I LIKED:How enchanting you made the sea seem.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:It made me smile.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
FLOW:This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though:Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
APPEAL:Those who like to read about fairies who trick people out of their lives will find this interesting.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:A bit unnerved at how quickly he fell under her spell.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
FLOW:This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
}My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though:Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee tale, The Dark Forest Serenade.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about vampires will love this.
WHAT I LIKED:The creepy feelings your words convey.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:a bit unnerved.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
POINT OF VIEW:I know who's point of view I’m in.
OTHER SUGGESTIONS/COMMENTS:This tale begs to be longer.
FLOW:This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee tale, Dagon's Promise.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about monsters will find this interesting.
WHAT I LIKED:The images your words created.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:A bit unnerved.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
POINT OF VIEW:I know who's point of view I’m in.
FLOW:This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee poem, Blue Roses.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about never giving up and roses will love this.
WHAT I LIKED:The image your words create.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:A bit sad then it brought tears of joy when the two lovers found each other again.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
FLOW:Thie rhyme makes this poem flow smoothly from beginning to end.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee tale, Chivalry.
APPEAL:Those who like to read fish tales will find this a cute read.
WHAT I LIKED:Charlie to save Maggie. wanted
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:It made me smile.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
OTHER SUGGESTIONS/COMMENTS:This needs spacing between the paragraph.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee tale, The Station.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about becoming out of sync will like this tiny tale.
WHAT I LIKED:The vivid images your words create.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee poem, Fear.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about things that go bump in the night scaring folks will love this.
WHAT I LIKED:The vivid images your words painted.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee poem, The Ghost.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about ghosts will like this tiny tale.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:A bit sad. The ghost scared that poor soul to death.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
You die whist your (you‘re) asleep
The pain as you (your) mind is turned to mush
FLOW:The rhyme in this poem made it flow smoothly from beginning to end.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee poem, Aradia's Broom.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about witches and magic will enjoy this poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The vivid images your words created.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
OTHER SUGGESTIONS/COMMENTS:Take heed not to poison your gift with thoughts glum" -- you might want to add so in front of glum
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee poem, Shop of Humans.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about the nature of humans and immortality will find this interesting to read.
WHAT I LIKED:Comapring immortality with mannequins.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
FLOW:This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee poem, Vengeance...
APPEAL:Those who like to read about getting vengeance will find this an interesting poem to red.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:A bit unnerved that a thirteen year old kills to get even with the person who killed his family..
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee poem, Misty Morning Memories.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about good valves will love this tiny poem.
WHAT I LIKED:That family is honored.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:It made me smile.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
OTHER SUGGESTIONS/COMMENTS:What an intriguing image under the poem. The bright blue grabs the reader‘s attention, too.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee poem, Timeless Guardian.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about guardians of nature will love this poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The rhythm the words created.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:It made me smile.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee tale, Stormy's Spirit.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about beloved pets will love this heart warming tale.
WHAT I LIKED:It‘s told from Stormy‘s point of view.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Extremely sad. I cried all the way through reading this.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
POINT OF VIEW:I know who's point of view I’m in.
OTHER SUGGESTIONS/COMMENTS:What a beautiful tribute to Stormy.
FLOW:This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee poem, Dead Men's Bones.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about dying and the dead will find this interesting.
WHAT I LIKED:The rhythm of the words.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:A bit sad.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand. The extra spacing made it easy on the eyes. Thank you.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
FLOW:This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee poem, In the Beginning.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about the arrival of Spring will love this.
WHAT I LIKED:The descriptive words used.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:It made me smile.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
FLOW:This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee poem, Lucifer's Hammer.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about conspiracies will find this interesting to read.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
OTHER SUGGESTIONS/COMMENTS:I’m a bit confused. What does a soda conspiracy have to do with Lucifer?
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee poem, The Falcon.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
NAMES:Names in stories make a big difference in creating believable places, people, & things. Are character names different or are they too similar to tell one character from the other?
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read The Devil's Kinsmen.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about the Devil taking control will like this tiny tale.
WHAT I LIKED:The images your words create.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
OTHER SUGGESTIONS/COMMENTS:This could become a very nice longer story.
FLOW:This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee poem, Forecast: Memories.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about falling snow will love this tiny tale.
WHAT I LIKED:Remembering playing in the snow with your siblings.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:A bit sad because of lost childhood, now that one of my brothers has passed.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
FLOW:This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at RTTC Review Sig.
WHAT I LIKED:The mysteriou hypnotic pull of the sea and the with its fiery halo.
APPEAL:Those who like the moon and the sea will like this signature.
The image matches the title quite well. The colors used are eye catching and appealing. The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image. The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
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Great job.
