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Review of Always Autumn  
Review by JenP
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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PUNCTUATION: Very good job on punctuation. It really made the poem flow nicely.


GRAMMAR: I found no grammar mistakes in this. Very good job.






FLOW: Once again this flowed very nicely. Made it an easy read.


What I liked the most: What I liked the most was how you acknowledged God in this piece. He is certainly worthy of our praise.


OVERALL THOUGHTS: Very nice poem. I can tell you had some great times with this person.


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Review of Sad Faces  
Review by JenP
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION: You did a great job on punctuation. It made it easy to follow.


GRAMMAR: Very good job on grammar. I found no mistakes.






FLOW: This poem flowed great. Probably one of the best I have read.


What I liked the most: What I liked the most is how you creeped into the actual plot. I also loved the ending.


OVERALL THOUGHTS: This is a great poem. I encourage you to continue to write. You certainly have talent.


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Review by JenP
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION: I found no punctuation errors in this. Great job!


GRAMMAR: I found grammar mistakes in this. Again great job writing this.






FLOW: It flowed great. It was an easy read as far as flow is concerned.


What I liked the most: I loved how you took your own story and made it into a poem form. I can only imagine how hard it must have been.


OVERALL THOUGHTS: This was a great poem. Written very well. I know how hard it must have been to write this. I am an abused child myself so I know how hard it must be. God Bless you.


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Review by JenP
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION: As a suggestion I would add end line punctuation. This is only a suggestion and you need not to follow it.


GRAMMAR: I found no grammar mistakes in this poem.






FLOW: It flowed nicely. I really didnt have a hard time reading it at all.


What I liked the most: What I liked most about this was how you went into detail about the experience you have had.


OVERALL THOUGHTS: Overall I really enjoyed this poem. You did a great job.


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Review of Somebody Like You  
Review by JenP
Rated: E | (4.5)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION: Just as a suggestion I would add some end line punctuation to this.


GRAMMAR: I found no grammar mistakes. You did great.






FLOW: This poem flowed great. I had an easy time reading it.


What I liked the most: What I liked about most was how honest you were about how someone like that would feel.


OVERALL THOUGHTS: This is a great poem. Yes, its dark but you definitely have talent.


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Review of The Promise  
Review by JenP
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION: Great job with the punctuation. It made it easy to read.


GRAMMAR: I found no grammar or spelling mistakes in this piece. Great job. Your word choice was great also.






FLOW: This piece flowed very nicely. It was an easy read indeed.


What I liked the most: What I liked the most was the bond between father and son. This piece showed a very strong bond between to men and you really hit it.


OVERALL THOUGHTS: This is a great piece. I wouldnt change a thing about it. I encourage you to continue writing. You are certainly good at it.


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Review by JenP
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION: As a general rule I would suggest adding end line punctuation. This is just a suggestion and need not to followed.


GRAMMAR: Grammar and spelling seem to be order. I found no mistakes in this area.






FLOW: It flowed very nicely except the first stanza, last line. You said I twice. Dont know if you meant to or it was a mistake but I would take that out. Once again this is only a suggestion.


What I liked the most: What I liked the most was how strongly you feel about your best friend. You can see the emotion coming off the paper.


OVERALL THOUGHTS: I really liked this piece. I think with some touching up it could be great.


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Review of The Angry Angels  
Review by JenP
Rated: E | (4.5)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION I found no punctuation errors in this piece. Very good job.




Grammar: I found no grammar or spelling errors in this piece. Very good job again.




FLOW: It flowed very nicely. I had no problems following it.


What I liked the most: What I liked the most was how he seen the angels yelling at his dog at the end of the story. It adds a little bit of humor to it.



OVERALL THOUGHTS: This was a very good piece. I encourage you to continue writing.


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Review by JenP
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION: I found no punctuation errors in this piece. You did a great job.


GRAMMAR: I found no grammar or spelling mistakes. Once again a great job.






FLOW: It flowed very nicely. It was an easy read my friend.


What I liked the most: What I liked the most was how it was short, sweet and right to the point.



OVERALL THOUGHTS: This is a great piece. Love does change everything. I encourage you to continue writing.



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Review of Overturned  
Review by JenP
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION: I found no punctuation errors in this piece. You did a great job.


GRAMMAR: I found no grammar or spelling mistakes in this poem.






FLOW: It flowed very well. It was an easy read.


What I liked the most: What I liked it how the poem went from being happy to sad. It sometimes happens in life.



OVERALL THOUGHTS: This is a great piece. I encourage you to continue to write.



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Review of Love  
Review by JenP
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION: I found no punctuation errors in this poem.


GRAMMAR: I only one mistake in this area and that was the first sentence. You typed "an" and I think it should be "and".






FLOW: It flowed very nicely. It was an easy read.


What I liked the most: What I liked the most was how you so wonderfully described love. You did a great job.



OVERALL THOUGHTS: I think this was a good piece. I encourage you to continue writing.



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Review by JenP
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION I found no punctuation errors in this piece. Great job.




Grammar: I found no grammar or spelling mistakes int this poem.




FLOW: It flowed very nicely. It was an easy read.


What I liked the most: What I liked most about it is how you pointed out that all of us are human and all of us deserve God's love and mercy. Very good job.



OVERALL THOUGHTS: This is a great piece. I encourage you to continue to write and spread God's mercy and love.


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Review of NO TIME  
Review by JenP
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION I found no punctuation errors in this poem. You did a great job.




Grammar:I found no grammar or spelling mistakes in this poem.




FLOW: It flowed very nicely. It was an easy read.


What I liked the most: What I liked the most was how you related to how most of us feel. We are always going against the clock.



OVERALL THOUGHTS:This is a great piece. I encourage you to continue to write.


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Review by JenP
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION: I found no punctuation errors in this poem. You did a great job.


GRAMMAR: I found no grammar or spelling mistakes in this piece.






FLOW: This poem flowed very nicely. I had no problems reading it at all.


What I liked the most: What I liked the most was how you described the war inside you. You did a great job. I could certainly feel what you are talking about.



OVERALL THOUGHTS: This is a great piece and I encourage you to continue writing.



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Review of Once Upon A Time  
Review by JenP
Rated: E | (4.0)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION: I found no punctuation errors in this. You did good.


GRAMMAR: I found no grammar errors in this however I did find one spelling error. You typed returnng instead of returning. Otherwise everything was great. Also fairy tales is two words. These are just my suggestions and need not to be followed.






FLOW: It flowed very nicely.


What I liked the most: What I liked that most was the ending. How you don't count on fairy tales anymore. I am glad that you recovered from being hurt.



OVERALL THOUGHTS: Very nice piece. I encourage you to continue writing.



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Review by JenP
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION You did good with the punctuation. I found no errors.




Grammar: I found no grammar or spelling errors in this. Great job.




FLOW: It flowed very nicely.


What I liked the most: What I liked the most was the fact that you had the nerve to just go to her house. That took some guts my friend.



OVERALL THOUGHTS: This is a very good piece and you should write more. I encourage you to do so. I would like to see how this story ends.


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Review by JenP
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION I found no punctuation errors in this piece.




Grammar: I found no grammar or spelling mistakes in this piece. You did a great job.




FLOW: It flowed very nicely. It was an easy read.


What I liked the most: What I liked the most is how you attempted to build up this girl to see the good inside of her.



OVERALL THOUGHTS: This is a great piece. I can only pray that she will soon see who she really is.


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Review of the autumn wind  
Review by JenP
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION: I found punctuation errors in this piece.


GRAMMAR: I found no grammar mistakes. However you did spell Autumn wrong in the last line. That was the only mistake I found.






FLOW: It flowed very nicely. It was an easy read.


What I liked the most: What I liked the most was the last line. You hold hope that you will see her again.



OVERALL THOUGHTS: This is a very good piece. I encourage you to continue to write. It's a great way to express yourself.



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Review of You Beat Me  
Review by JenP
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You can use them if you want or not.


PUNCTUATION: I found no punctuation errors in this piece.


GRAMMAR: I found no grammar or spelling mistakes in this piece.




FLOW: It flowed very well. I could tell who was speaking. It was an easy read.


What I liked the most: What I liked the most was how you kept the reader holding on til the end. You really want to see what is happening and how this ends.


OVERALL THOUGHTS: This is a great piece. I encourage you to continue writing.









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Review of Beauty? Why?  
Review by JenP
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION I found no punctuation errors in this poem.




Grammar: I found no grammar or spelling mistakes in this poem. Very good job.




FLOW: It flowed very nicely. It was an easy read.


What I liked the most: What I liked the most is the ending. Some people do not realize how much He loves us.



OVERALL THOUGHTS: My over all thoughts is that this is a great poem. There is beauty everywhere if we just open our eyes.


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Review of Lost  
Review by JenP
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION: Punctuation was good in this poem. The third stanza however needs end line punctuation. This is only a suggestion and need not to be followed.


GRAMMAR: I found no grammar mistakes in this poem.






FLOW: It flowed very nicely. I had no problem following it.


What I liked the most: What I liked the most was the ending. Reborn again and that's great.



OVERALL THOUGHTS: This was a very good poem. I encourage you to continue writing.



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Review of Untitled poem  
Review by JenP
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION: As a suggestion I would add some punctuation to this poem. This is only a suggestion and need not to be followed.


GRAMMAR: I found no grammar or spelling mistakes in this piece.






FLOW: It flows very nicely. It was an easy read.


What I liked the most: I can't say that there is one thing that I like about this since I like the whole thing.



OVERALL THOUGHTS: This is a good poem. I haven't come up with any ideas as far as a title yet but I will think of one and email you. I encourage you to continue writing.



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Review of I want her  
Review by JenP
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION: As a suggestion I would add some more punctuation to this piece. This is only a suggestion and need not to be followed.


GRAMMAR: I didn't find any grammar errors but I would capitalize I in every sentence. This is only a suggestion.






FLOW: It flowed nicely. It wasn't hard to read.


What I liked the most: What I liked the most was your honesty in this piece.



OVERALL THOUGHTS: This is a good piece that needs a little work. Keep up the good work.



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Review of You  
Review by JenP
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION I found no punctuation errors in this poem.




Grammar: I found no grammar or spelling mistakes in this poem. Great job.




FLOW: It flowed real nice. It was an easy read.


What I liked the most: I can't say theres one thing that I like the most cause I like the whole thing. I like your honesty in this piece.



OVERALL THOUGHTS: This is a good read. I encourage you to continue to write as it's a good way to let go of those feelings.


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Review of Prayers for Love  
Review by JenP
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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DISCLAIMER: I am an author just like you. My suggestions are just that... suggestions. You need not to follow them.



PUNCTUATION: I found no punctuation errors in this. You did a great job.


GRAMMAR: I found no grammar or spelling mistakes in this poem.






FLOW: This poem flowed very nicely. Great job.


What I liked the most: What I liked the most is the fact that you are not speaking to God on your behalf but to help others. That to me shows what kind of a person you are.



OVERALL THOUGHTS: I really liked this piece. You spoke to God and I truly hope He has answered your prayers.



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