In the story we see the constant efforts of the candidate to pass the competition. But in spite of this there are certain flaws in her approach.You have clearly outlined her area of weaknesses and aptitudes to speak in public.It's quite natural that she feels nervous before the start' the cracking of her voice'.Nevertheless she won the third prize
A good poem written in many stanzas with consistent rhyming.You have emphasized about the importance of water throughout the lines.I like the way you have pictured the flower before and after Sally took care of it.The differences are very conspicuous.We must be prepared to offer a helping hand to a dying creature.
The poem is well developed in a few stanzas with free verse style.It's a real fact that with the mode of modern living man is responsible for many of his acts . In fact only he is to be blamed for his actual condition. You have rightly enumerated the consequences of our bad deeds.There is a price to pay for that
A good poem made up in three stanzas with consistent rhyming.The theme of sincerity is well exploited . It is the foundation stone for the duration of a well established relationship which is very rare nowadays.True love
obviously leads to achieve one's goal in life.Unfortunately it's all the opposite now.
The poem is well written as far as a triplet is concerned and the rhyming also is conspicuous.You have respected all the rules regarding the poem.The theme of love is prevalent. But here you have described failure in love due to death and you have invoked the angels also to mourn for the beloved.it is a tragic love story.
Good poem written in three stanzas with rhyming. You have used the word basement to refer to childhood which is obviously the starting point of life.A retrospective of childhood makes us feel nostalgic.Those were the days when life was flowing like a river.Unfortunately, it will not come back
The poem is well built in three long stanzas with free verse style.from the opening line it is quite evident that love begins from the eyes when they become four. True lovers can easily understand the language of the eyes.You have well illustrated the sensation of the feelings in love.Gradually, there is maturity in love.But only few people succeed to maintain it till the end.
The poem is well structured with good rhyming.Again the topic of love is depicted in throughout the lines.Can't there be love without sufferings?Here the element of Stoicism is prevalent in the first stanza with silent grief.It is a strong plea to make the lover realise the importance of love in life.
These few poems are nicely written based on different topics. In some of them there are good rhyming in all of them.The theme varies from one poem to another. The most appreciable ones seem to be Retrospective and Resignation where the subject is quite remarkable. You have depicted Harold's character and his bad habits.
The poem, written in four stanzas has good rhyming which adds to the beauty of the theme.Friendship is important to forge ahead in life. Everybody needs some sort of support but true friends are rare. Some make friends just for their own benefits. A friend in need is a friend indeed
A very passionate story illustrating your courage and determination to save the dog from that loathsome and pitiless creature who was harming the dog.Indeed your bravery must be admired . You had the guts to face the fellow who was torturing the animal. In fact such creatures need our company and protection.It was a great job.
The story is set in a humid atmosphere where it is raining heavily.You have given the reader the state of mind of the main character, Riaana who is upset from the recent fight.But, preferring to be alone in the crowd she meets a formidable person when going out for dinner who is going to change her mood and the course of her life- an unknown stranger
The writing transcends the reader in a world of fairies with angels taking their flight. Is it some sort of escapism form this world of miseries and turmoil? Any way the two angels seem to appreciate their flight even if Kelly is not happy with the colour of her wings. I get the impression that they don't know the route to the world.
The poem written in four stanzas has consistent rhyming. The theme itself is a very controversial subject. Although it's true that many soldiers have sacrified their lives in the Iraq war was it justified?America waged war in the hope of finding chemical weapons. Is there any proof about it? With the collateral damage thousands of innocent civilians have been massacred.
The story is painted with fiction throughout. On this planet lives only four persons. And we see that there is even a vet to treat the dog.The dog gives birth to puppies increasing the animal population . Human beings are very rare. I am surprised to read that there is a thief also and the police as well
The poem is well written in four stanzas and has consistent rhyming.You have painted the rose with all the required attributes.From beginning to end there is a good illustration of how the rose blooms into a flower. Indeed it symbolises love which reminds me of St. Valentine's Day. May be that's why you consider the rose as your wife
The poem written in continuous lines has some partial rhyming.It flows well. You have depicted a wonderful image of the bottom of the sea. Indeed it's a different world where there is utter silence. Here one can admire the beauties of nature and feel the existence of the Supreme being which you have described in line 9.However, with pollution every where the sea life is being destroyed
From the story it is seen that Adam was not fully prepared before his marriage. Out of his inattention the child had a severe accident which handicapped him for the rest of life.Although He devoted all his time, care and attention towards him it was irreversible.While trying to correct his mistake by looking for other children the second one deserted him while the daughter was neglected. So, it was not a successful family.
A well structured poem with five equal lined stanzas written in free verse.It flows smoothly .Obviously peace cannot be easily achieved in today's world.After several of years of fighting and destruction many countries sign peace agreements which are not respected.The last stanza has fully demonstrated these concepts
A beautiful poem written in only seven lines. There is no apparent rhyming. Yes you have rightly described the puppy to show how cute it is. At this period the puppy needs good care and attention. It also likes to stay with its mother depending on her for milk.I like its playful attitude
The ideas about the book and your personal opinion about the book gives the reader much information about what's actually going on in the educational institutions. Indeed, it's high time to ponder on the drawbacks of the system and its products.Taking into account the condition of the public schools it requires a radical reform to render education its previous value.Are the students really receiving a good education which will make them responsible citizens?
From the very beginning Susan was in suspense not knowing where they were heading or what's the big trouble.Only on reaching the hospital she guessed that something was wrong.Here, she was stupefied to learn that her boyfriend has been involved in an accident and it was serious.Moreover,as she doesn't know his family she feels lost
At first it seems that you were not eager to explore the world of education but it was on the insistence of your father that you decided to go ahead. It was really some sort of stimulation to progress in your career. In fact education does not have any ending. We learn throughout our life.Everyday there are new things.With better qualifications you will certainly aspire for jobs of higher positions. So, I think it was the right decision
The poem, written in free verse is built in continuous lines. It flows easily describing the daily routine life of an employee.You have rightly pointed out how the worker is now turning into a robot who has been programmed on a daily basis. For him life is just travel work and sleep. I don't see in what way can he be a lucky dog?
At the very outset you must have been upset and depressed when you learnt about cancer .But gradually as time goes on your doctor must have reassured you about the disease and its prognosis.Obviously you must arm yourself with a good dose of patience and courage to confront reality.Nowadays with high tech medicine carcinoma can be treated and in certain cases completely cured. Of course, you feel relieved after the resposne of the treatment
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