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I'm the lead editor for a small independent press, but I am on maternity leave for the next several years and thus not accepting submissions. I'll tell you my professional opinion on first chapters or short pieces and whether I would have accepted it or rejected it if I was looking for work. I've dealt most with controversial speculative fiction, and I'm most interested in polyamory a.k.a consensual non-monogamy.
Favorite Genres
Science Fiction, Historical Fiction, Fantasy, Romance, Dystopia, Erotica
Least Favorite Genres
stream of consciousness
Favorite Item Types
Short Stories, Novels, Fraternal Polyandry
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've covered some intense emotions in just a few words. Thanks for taking me on this journey with you.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Thank you for sharing these deeply personal thoughts. Writing about these things is a great way to process your feelings and let others who have had similar experiences know they are not alone.

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Review of Love  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

I agree with many of these sentiments. It is important for people to love themselves first, and being in a relationship with someone who does not love themselves is a real drag. Receiving unconditional love from one's parents makes loving one's self a lot easier. Unfortunately, many people struggle because they did not receive unconditional love in the first place.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is handy information. It could be even more compelling if you told a story about someone who used these tips.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've created a rich world with colorful characters. I like how they are all very motivated.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've painted a vivid picture with your words. Thank you for taking me on this journey with you.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

I wish this was true. I've seen an artist's marriage fall apart over a younger woman, and they had a 9-year-old son.

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Review of A Lost Escape  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This provides a lot of food for thought. Personally, with what I know of human psychology, memories tend to fade if they are not accessed regularly and kept alive. We treasure our most precious memories and forget what we had for breakfast two days ago.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is handy information. It could be even more compelling if you told a story about someone who used these tips.

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Review of FAVE WRITERS  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

That's a big list of favorites! I'm familiar with many of them, but my absolute favorites are Ray Bradbury, Isaac Asimov, and Robert Heinlein.

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Review of Tranquil Fields  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've painted a beautiful picture with your words. Thank you for sharing this slice of peace with me.

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Review of Chapter 1  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is a great start! Keep up the hard work, and I am sure you will weave a magnificent tale.

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Review of M1HBL  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is a great start! Keep up the hard work, and I am sure you will weave a magnificent tale.

Try avoiding forms of the verb “to be” such as is, are, was, were, etc. This is known as passive language. Using more colorful verbs can greatly strengthen your writing.

Example:
His favorite movies are Hell’s Angels and Rebel Without a Cause, which I think says a lot about him.

He loves watching Hell’s Angels and Rebel Without a Cause, which I think says a lot about him.

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Review of Lost Umbrella  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This was a delightfully heartwarming story. Thanks for brightening my day.

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Review of For Her  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

I still feel this way about my first love from 2007. It's impossible to replace a person with another, so that's why I turned to polyamory. This way, I can still leave room for my first love if he ever comes back to me. However, I'm not going to leave my husband and boyfriend if my first love shows up demanding exclusivity.

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Review of 15th March  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Thank you for sharing these deeply personal thoughts. Writing about these things is a great way to process your feelings and let others who have had similar experiences know they are not alone.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review of Dead Zone POC  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've created a unique world populated with colorful characters.

Try avoiding forms of the verb “to be” such as is, are, was, were, etc. This is known as passive language. Using more powerful verbs can greatly strengthen your writing.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

I've felt that way lately. I'm 35 and now seeking an autism diagnosis because life is very overwhelming for me. I have special ed records going back to elementary school. I believe that special ed taught me to mask autism and to stop complaining rather than to accept that part of myself. I've heard from people on YouTube and social media that it was once believed that girls didn't get autism, so I was given the label "emotionally disturbed" instead.

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Review of The Emerald Frame  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've painted a vivid picture with your words. Thank you for taking me on this journey with you.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've painted a vivid picture with your words. Thank you for taking me on this journey with you.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review of A Huge Disaster  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

I love time travel stories and how they always lead to incredible adventures. You did a great job with this one.

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Review of The Letter  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've conveyed some powerful emotions here. Indeed, war sucks.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is handy information. It could be even more compelling if you told a story about someone who used these tips.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This sounds like a unique world. Keep up the hard work, and I am sure you will weave a magnificent tale.

Try avoiding forms of the verb “to be” such as is, are, was, were, etc. This is known as passive language. Using more colorful verbs can greatly strengthen your writing.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
I am also running a contest in case you are interested:
 
FORUM
Not Just Another Brick In The Wall  (ASR)
Most teachers are amazing, but sometimes . . .
#2281472 by K5Rakitan

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