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Open, honest, heartfelt, sincere. If I see something wrong I feel you should fix. I will tell you.
I'm good at...
Making people feel good about themselves. Helping others. Being honest. Caring for others. Letting you know what sounds good or makes others feel wanted or special.
Favorite Genres
Non-Fiction, real life, romance
Least Favorite Genres
I don't really have a least favorite. I am not good at writing poetry.
Favorite Item Types
non-fiction, real life, romance, fiction, fantasy, mystery
Least Favorite Item Types
distasteful,raunchy erotica... Now write tasteful sexy eroctica and I will gladly read and review it.
I will not review...
distasteful,raunchy erotica and Bestiality
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Review of One Last Time  
Review by Marcia~I'm ...
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi! This is a review from "Showering Acts of Joy Group" after reading"One Last Time" 

I have the following comments to offer:*BigSmile*

Hi! My name is Marcia. I am excited to be here your port. I saw that you were on our shower review board and I decided that I wanted to review something different then I would normally review. To be honest I am not a huge fan of poetry so, I usually don't read it or review it. For me poetry is hard to review.

*Flower1*First Impression:

This piece made me smile *Smile*. It made me think of my nine year old grandson,Brandon, who is almost impossible to put to bed. "Just for a little longer Mom Mom, Please." "One more time Mom Mom." Your poem left me with happy thoughts. Thank you so much. I really don't know what made me look at it, but am so glad that I did.*Delight*

*Idea*Suggestions:

Please,continue to write On! Your poetry brightened my whole day and may have helped me view poetry in a new light. *Thought*

*Note1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar:

I am still in the learning stage with writing in this area, I don't see anything that stands out to me that is wrong, but this is only my opinion. Your writing is yours and yours only to do what you feel is best. I am only here to help and encourage you to continue keep writing.

*Star*What I Like:

I really enjoyed the way you put on paper how hard it is for some children to get rid of their energy at night and go to sleep. Your poem is really cute.

Take Care and May God Bless You!
Love,*Heart* Marcia
Marcia~I'm Home :)

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Review by Marcia~I'm ...
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi! This is a review from "Showering Acts of Joy Group" after reading"Counting Until Tomorrow " 

I have the following comments to offer:*BigSmile*

Hello, My name is Marcia. I see that you are new to writing.com. It is an amazing magical place to come just relax or make whole new bunch of friends that you may eventually think of as your second family. I know I did. I am so excited to welcome you here!
I want to thank you for stopping by my port. I get lots of visitors. I am in the process of writing my life story so, I will be around quite a bit until I get it done. It is my purpose in life at least that is what I believe so, I am determined to get it done soon. Enough about me, I am here to give a review on your piece called "Counting Until Tomorrow "  You see, I am sure that you figured out by now that here at writing.com we help each other out by giving member to member reviews on each others work. We offer our opinions to one another to help each other grow as writers. We don't have to agree with each other,but it is fun to see what others think of your work.

*Flower1*First Impression:

This piece makes me feel like you are very sad inside.

*Idea*Suggestions:

Holding on your rope and it's starting to break
try:
Holding on to your rope and it's starting to break

Please remember that your writing is yours and yours only to do what you see fit. I am only here to help if you chose to take my advise it is up to you.

*Note1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar:

I am just learning about all of this and witting myself so, I will leave this to the experts, but I don't see anything wrong.

*Star*What I Like:
I like that you have found a place to put your feelings down. I know for me that it has been a huge help. I hope that this is just the beginning for you. I hope it has a positive affect on your life from this moment forward. Someone special shared this quote with me when I really needed it so, I am going to share it with you now, I hope that it helps you look at everything in a whole new way, because it sure made me view everything differently. Remember, That "No one can make you feel less amazing!"

Take Care and May God Bless You!
*Heart* Love,Marcia
Marcia~I'm Home :)

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Review by Marcia~I'm ...
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi! This is a review from "Showering Acts of Joy Group" after reading"Looking Into God's Assurance" 

I have the following comments to offer:*BigSmile*

Hello! It is Marcia again. I decided to come and visit your port some more it is so comfy in here and it feels like home to me, so I pulled up a chair and started looking around and look were Heavenly, Father lead me, yup, right here to this wonderful piece you wrote. "Looking Into God's Assurance" 

*Flower1*First Impression:

I felt like I was lead to this story. I am a firm believer in the idea that everything that happens in your life happens for a reason. God has a plan, a purpose for everyone. When we were born he gave us something called free agency. Which means he gave us the right to choose between right and wrong and because we are human sometimes we don't always make the right choices. That is why God gave us a full proof way to get back to heaven to live with him in eternity. It is just amazing how he loves us so much.

*Idea*Suggestions:

Stay strong in your beliefs and continue to share your wonderful stories with everyone who will allow you too.

*Note1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar:

I am learning about all of this and writing myself, so I will leave this to the experts, but I don't see anything that needs to be fixed. Anything that I have said in this review is only my opinion your writing is awesome, and it yours and yous alone please, continue to write on!

*Star*What I Like:

I like that you are willing to share your faith and belief in God.
Take Care and may God bless you and your family, and I pray that your faith and belief grows stronger each day!

Love, Marcia
Marcia~I'm Home :)

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Review of A Simple Rescue  
Review by Marcia~I'm ...
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi! This is a review from "Showering Acts of Joy Group" after reading"Invalid Item" 

I have the following comments to offer:*BigSmile*

Hi! My name is Marcia. I am a member of the Shower acts of Joy group. I am excited to be giving you this review. I love to read and write. I support writing.com and believe in everything we do here to make our members happy and keep them writing.

*Flower1*First Impression:

When I read your piece it made me think of myself so much. I am so much like the wife in this story. I am always thinking about how I can help other people. Yes, sometimes even when they don't even try to help themselves. It is just who I am. It is part of my character. It makes me happy to always help others. I think God made some of us like that so that there could be a balance between good and bad. Does that make sense? I was born with cerebral palsy, but I have this need inside of me to help other people. It makes me feel so good. I know I need help at times, but when I am the one helping someone else it feels amazing inside.


*Idea*Suggestions:

I think this was well written so I don't have any suggestions other then for you to keep writing!
*Note1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar:

I am just leaning in this area myself.

*Star*What I Like:

I liked how the husband helped his brother anyway just to make his ailing wife happy *Smile*
Take Care. and may God bless you! Marcia
Marcia~I'm Home :)

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Review of Always a Victim  
Review by Marcia~I'm ...
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi! My name is Marcia I am proud to say that I am a member of several groups here at writing.com."Invalid Item" ,the"Invalid Item" ,the group"Invalid Item"  and I am proud to say that I have just become a member of "The Brainstormers Group"  *Delight* I would like to give you a review on "Always a Victim" 

I have the following comments to offer:*BigSmile*
I have been away from reviewing for some time now,but I want you to know that I enjoy reviewing and that I take it seriously.

*Flower1*First Impression:

Wow, I can't believe you left us hanging like that. You sure left me wanting to come back for more. I am not a big fan of horror stories, but I have tell you, that you left me wondering and in suspense. I like that in a writer!

*Idea*Suggestions:

My only suggestion is keep up the good work and Write On!

*Note1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar:

I don't see any punctuation mistakes,but I must be honest and tell you that I am still learning in this area myself.
*Star*What I Like:

I liked that you were able to make me feel like I want to read on even though I really don't like horror stories.
Marcia~I'm Home :)

Take Care and May God Bless You!
Marcia
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Review of Kaden's Lullaby  
Review by Marcia~I'm ...
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! My name is Marcia I am proud to say that I am a member of several groups here at writing.com."Invalid Item" ,the"Invalid Item" ,the group"Invalid Item"  and I am proud to say that I have just become a member of "The Brainstormers Group"  *Delight* I would like to give you a review on "Kaden's Lullaby" 

I have the following comments to offer:*BigSmile*

You are my Angel here at writing.com. I hope you know that I wish there was a way I could take all of your burdens away. I have realized that our Father in heaven works in mysterious ways. We may be having a hard time in one area of our lives, but he sends us something or someone (Kaden) to give you strength and re-new your spirit.

*Flower1*First Impression:

This song/poem came from your heart and soul! It made me smile and cry tears of joy at the same time. Kaden is so precious.


*Idea*Suggestions:

I don't have any suggestions about the writing of this piece, but I do think you should sing this song to Kaden often. When he gets older he will remember and treasure the fact that you sang to him.

*Note1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar:

You taught me so, I better leave this for the experts.

*Star*What I Like:

I liked that you wrote this just for Kaden.
I would love to sing it to Evan. Would you mind if I did?
Marcia~I'm Home :)


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Review by Marcia~I'm ...
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi! My name is Marcia I am proud to say that I am a member of several groups here at writing.com."Invalid Item" ,the"Invalid Item" ,the group"Invalid Item"  and I am proud to say that I have just become a member of "The Brainstormers Group"  *Delight* I would like to give you a review on "The Magic Mirrors Prologue" 

I have the following comments to offer:*BigSmile*

I am honored to give you your first review
*Flower1*First Impression:


I like your ideas. I hope this is just the beginning of your journey here at WdC.
*Idea*Suggestions:
Save the quotation marks for distinguishing when dialogue is used.
Use Bold Font: Example mom's special juice

These are only suggestions. Your work is yours to do anything you wish with it. I am only here to make suggestions if you like them feel free to use them if you don't that is okay.

*Note1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar:

I didn't notice anything that stood out someone else's opinion may be different.

*Star*What I Like:

I like that you have an imagination. This story has many ways that it could go. Chrystal is very strong character right from the beginning.
Write On! Aimerz *Delight*I am looking forward to reading more.

Marcia~I'm Home :)


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Review of Ice cream night  
Review by Marcia~I'm ...
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi! My name is Marcia I am proud to say that I am a member of several groups here at writing.com."Invalid Item" ,the"Invalid Item" ,the group"Invalid Item"  and I am proud to say that I have just become a member of "The Brainstormers Group"  *Delight* I would like to give you a review on "Ice cream night" 

I have the following comments to offer:*BigSmile*

Oh Man, I am really carving some Dairy Queen right now!

*Flower1*First Impression:

Ice cream is one of my favorite snacks and I so agree that it has a way of bringing a family together.

*Idea*Suggestions:

My only suggestion is that you might want try family game night

*Note1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar:

Your spelling and grammar look awesome to me.

*Star*What I Like:

I really enjoyed reading your family story. It was very easy to read and comprehend. I really enjoy reading true life stories. I am writing my life story here at writing.com. I am finished the prologue: How It All Began and Chapter 1-My Surgery. Stop by my port if you like. *Smile*

Marcia~I'm Home :)


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Review of Nuclear Dupe  
Review by Marcia~I'm ...
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi! This is a review from "Showering Acts of Joy Group" after reading"Nuclear Dupe" 

I have the following comments to offer:*BigSmile*

Hello my name is Marcia. I am a member of "Invalid Item"  I saw that you have some work that needs reviewing so I stopped by your port to look around and see if anything caught my interest. I brought some lemonade and cookies with me to share with you. I never know if I may run into someone that can't have regular sugar so I brought diet and regular with me as well. I will just put it all here on the table. Feel free to enjoy what you like I baked the cookies with my daughter. She has to help me with the oven as, you see, I have Cerebral Palsy and it is difficult for me to hold my canes and the cookie tray at the same time,but,she doesn't mind.

*Flower1*First Impression:

Wow this piece shows how scarey it can really be these days. All joking a side. Something similar to this could really happen. I really enjoyed this. It was well written and very easy to understand. I think it shows how easy it would be for a serious disaster to occur. It also shows how easy someone could miss all of the signs because their minds are on something else and not their work. I found this very sad. It made me wonder, "How often has this kind of thing really happened?"

*Idea*Suggestions:

This piece is well written. I would recommend it for other to read *Smile* Please continue to write. I would enjoy reading more of what you write.

*Note1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar:

I don't see any spelling mistakes. I found this piece very enjoyable and easy to read.

*Star*What I Like:

I liked the humor that you used even though in the end it really wasn't a funny situation. Write On! Take care and May God Bless. Marcia

Marcia~I'm Home :)

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Review by Marcia~I'm ...
In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Itchy Water~fictionandverse . This is a review from "Invalid Item" ! Smile After reading "THROUGH THE EYES OF ANOTHER"  I have the following comments to offer.

Hello! It is Marcia I have come to visit your port. I am sorry it has taken me so long to get here. I have been very busy,but I wrote a special note to myself to remind me that I had a special stop to make no matter how busy I got. I had a hard time choosing there are so many wonderful things to enjoy in here. I could spend all night. I forgot my blanket and pillow.

*Flower1*First Impression:

Inspiration always brings me back to my own spirituality. I love it. It reminds me of the day I was saved and baptized. What an awesome day that was. It makes you want to tell the world that you see the world through a new set of eyes now.
*Idea*Suggestions:

I had some trouble understanding this line. It didn't flow as well as all the rest did.

Our perceptions blindly skew us foolishly.

I think it means that we don't see ourselves the way others do,so sometimes we may do things that we think are right ,but they are really wrong or foolish.

*Note1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar:

I didn't see any spelling mistakes. I am just learning punctuation and grammar myself so I must leave that to someone more qualified.

*Star*Things I Like:

But it was in the eyes of Jesus that I saw my hope.

I love this line. It is so true because if it was not for Jesus none of us would have hope. I carry his hope with me everyday and it helps me to stay strong.

And through his love and mercy I am alive.
This is such a true statement for me because when I was born my parents were told not to expect me to live.

THANK YOU.for letting me share your work. It has made me *Smile* May God bless and take care. Marcia

Marcia~I'm Home :)

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Review of Roo's Tale  
Review by Marcia~I'm ...
In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Sandy B. . This is a review from "Invalid Item" ! After reading "Roo's Tale" 

I have the following comments to offer.

Hello Sandra. My name is Marcia I am on a mission to do some reviewing and your short story Roo's tale caught my eye so I stopped by your port I hope you don't mind. It caught my eye because I love Winnie the Pooh and Kanga and Roo two of my favorite characters.

*Flower1*First Impression:

Your writing impressed me. It is very descriptive. I felt like I could picture everything Joey was doing in my mind. I really enjoy that when I read. I like it when it takes me to a new place in my mind,but I haven't even left my living room or where ever I happen to be reading at the time. I read in all kinds of places ah the beauty of the kindle and technology today.

*Idea*Suggestions:

I suggest that you find an artist that can add wonderful color pictures to your adorable story. I picture the book big enough so it is nice and easy to hold and read while you hold a curious,excited or sleepy child on your lap. *Smile*

*Note1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar:

This is the only spelling mistake I came across.
its head leant to one side.

there is an extra t in here. I am sure you want it to read: its head lean to one side.
I am not very good at punctuation and grammar yet myself so I must leave that to someone better qualified.

*Star*Things I Like:

I love the excitement in the story from beginning to end. I love the moral of the story "Listen to your parents no matter how tempted you are not to." You life may depend on it. *Smile*

Marcia~I'm Home :) Take care and May God Bless! Marcia

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Review by Marcia~I'm ...
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi! Writing~Darlin This is a review from "Showering Acts of Joy Group" after reading"Rock-a-Bye Bye Baby" 

I have the following comments to offer:*BigSmile*


*Flower1*First Impression:

I liked that you were able to express your feelings so beautifully in this poem about your son *Smile*

*Idea*Suggestions:

Always remember that your son is always with you in your mind,in your heart,in your soul,he is really always with you that is why Jesus gave us all the choice to choose eternal life *Smile*

*Star*What I Like:

I liked rhythm and the rhyme of this poem! It is awesome! I really enjoyed it. It is very easy to understand! I can relate to this writer because I lost one my niece at the beginning of this year she was like a daughter to me. We were very close.
I liked that you know you will be with your son again when God says it is your time. I send you much love and strength!

May God Bless and Please continue to Write On!

Marcia Belle Bucella

Marcia~I'm Home :)

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Review by Marcia~I'm ...
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi! Dave This is a review from "Showering Acts of Joy Group" after reading"unaware giantess girlfriend" 

I have the following comments to offer:*BigSmile* I see that you have just recently joined us here at writing.com and would like to take this time to welcome you to our community! There is much to learn,see and do here right at your finger tips! I hope you enjoy everything that is offered here at WdC.(writing.com)


*Flower1*First Impression: I was happy to see how excited you were to get started with your first interactive story!


*Idea*Suggestions: Please remember whatever I say are only suggestions. Your story is yours and it should be the way you want it.

I suggest that you read your work and make sure it is exactly the way you want it. The way you want your readers to see it. You can Preview your work with the preview button at the bottom of everything you work on before you send it out for review. You can even do this with your e-mail.


*Note1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar:

There are some spelling mistakes I noticed ,but I think you were just excited to get started and your fingers were moving to fast. Just look over it when you get a chance. Again the story is yours remember that always. I don't spell well. I have to use spell check. I am still learning punctuation myself,so I leave that to someone else *Smile*

*Star*What I Like:

I like the fact that you asked me to be a part of your story. I liked the excitement that shows in your writing! I am pondering on what I want to write in my chapter of your story. I will be back my friend when I have come up with something...hmmm *Smile*

Marcia~I'm Home :)
Take care,May God Bless! and Write On!
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Review by Marcia~I'm ...
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Judy!This is a review from "Showering Acts of Joy Group" after reading"My Saga with Leukemia" 

I have the following comments to offer:*BigSmile* I could tell that your strength comes from your family. I know that you treasure every second with your grand babies!

*Flower1*First Impression: You are an amazing writer! I am sorry you have had to endure such a struggle in your life. I know that it has made you a stronger person *Smile* God will bless you that is for sure!

*Idea*Suggestions: Stay strong,keep writing,and continue to be the amazing woman God wants you to be *Smile*

*Star*What I Like: How awesome it was of you to let us all share in your struggle. You helped people realize that everyday is a new "gift" Keep writing... anyone that reads your story should get that message without you saying it. Eat well,Take care and Write On Marcia


Marcia~I'm Home :)

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Review of For a Lifetime  
Review by Marcia~I'm ...
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi This is a review from "Showering Acts of Joy Group" after reading"For a Lifetime" 

I have the following comments to offer:*BigSmile* Amazing writing!

*Flower1*First Impression:

I am a sucker for happy endings! I loved it! your Poetry is so wonderful. I enjoy it so much! I am not a fan of poetry,but I am now! Your writing helped me to see that there are different kinds of poetry! Your poems make sense to me...

*Idea*Suggestions:

Keep writing your poetry!

*Star*What I Like:

I love that it is so easy to read and that I can understand it!

Marcia~I'm Home :)
Take Care, God bless and Write On! Marcia
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Review by Marcia~I'm ...
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi firegoddess79 This is a review from "Showering Acts of Joy Group" after reading"Can You See it in My Eyes?" 

I have the following comments to offer:*BigSmile*
Keep writing!

*Flower1*First Impression:

I could really relate to this poem. It reminded me of when I first thought I was in love. It felt like he should be able to see it in my eyes! *Smile*

*Idea*Suggestions:

I felt like Can you see it in my eyes? would be something you would say so I think it should be in quotation marks.

*Star*What I Like:

I liked that this poem was easy to read. I come across so many that I don't like because they are hard to read. I enjoyed yours very much and would come back to read more. *Smile*

"Can you see it in my eyes?" It is only a suggestion. The piece is yours and it is awesome!
Take care, may God bless and Write On

Marcia~I'm Home :)


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Review by Marcia~I'm ...
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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Pat,

I absolutely LOVE Teddy bears. You can NEVER EVER! have enough teddy bears! I was looking for a signature and here he is,but I wish my name was on him somehow. I don't know how to do it. He is Awesome! Marcia
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Review by Marcia~I'm ...
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Sanarda Belle,

Hello my name is Marcia Belle *Smile* Your name caught my eye *Smile* Yes that is my real name. I enjoyed reading your blog about yourself. I think it was a pretty awesome way to introduce yourself to the readers and reviewers here at writing.com. I wish I would have thought about doing something like your blog when I joined.

I think it is well written without being too personal.*Smile* but here you can be yourself so you can be as personal as you want. We are all here to help each other get the most out of this incredible website. It is a safe place to be. You can make some wonderful friends too.

I gave you a 4 because it take guts to put yourself out there in the beginning. I didn't see any spelling mistakes. I know you weren't really worried about grammar or punctuation because it was just a casual journal entry. You write well and I enjoyed reading it and getting to know you. I Look forward to more entries! Write On! Marcia
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Review by Marcia~I'm ...
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow what an amazing piece. It brought tears to my eyes. Chills down the back of my spine.

It is well written. *Smile* I am truly at a loss for words for a second hold on I have to ponder this. One could look at this two ways.

1) Karen is brain dead and she talking to her inner self wanting to be alive or 2) She can hear Dave but he can't hear her because she is with God now.

hmmm? Or am I way off? I hope not *Smile*
Marcia aka Marcy Belle
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Review of I Can't Believe  
Review by Marcia~I'm ...
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow that was amazing to read! I need to learn how to do that. I am not very good at dialog. I should challenge myself. I already know there is too much He said/she said I said in my story I would like to fix it but how do I do it and keep my story in the first person? Any suggestions?
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Review by Marcia~I'm ...
Rated: E | (4.5)
1) I enjoyed reading your story. It was very interesting. I am going to assume that the main characters got together in the end because that is how I want it to end *Smile*

2) The punctuation is a little off. unless you are using it to make a point in the story. Then I understand why you used it the way you did. *Smile*

3) As the reader I liked the way it was written. It was very easy to read and comprehend.

4) I just wish Jenny didn't keep all her real feelings to herself *Smile* You left me wanting to read more!

Great Job! Write On!
Marcia aka Marcy Bell
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Review by Marcia~I'm ...
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear looking ahead,

1) All I can say is wow! So many different things can happen in a persons life that can cause them to become depressed. I struggle with depression because I think I made some bad choices in my life but then I look at the other side of the coin and say but really if I had it to do over again would I do something different? Somethings yes but most no.Then I remember that life isn't so bad. I am just mad because my kids got hurt. I am their Mother it was my job to protect them and I wasn't there. Now they are grown and take care of me. All I want to do is cry

4)What a beautiful quote sounds like something Jesus would say *Smile*
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Review by Marcia~I'm ...
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can only hope that some day I will be able to look back and say that so many people have touched my work here. Mine is still a dream but, each day I sign in hoping that my angel will come. I believe in my dreams and in myself so I won't give up. Your poem inspired me. Thank you! THE WDC will come to my port soon. I know i have a lot to learn but I know with the right teacher my story will touch/help many people so I MUST WRITE AND DREAM ON! Marcia aka Marcibelle
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Review by Marcia~I'm ...
Rated: E | (4.0)
I think its a great start full of excitement and real possibilities because I believe your mind can take you anywhere you want to go as long you believe in yourself and the endless places your dreams can take you *Smile* Take Care! Write On! Marcy Bell
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Review of Self-Sacrifice  
Review by Marcia~I'm ...
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could not have said these words more perfect myself. My children are my world. They are what my dreams are made of. They are the blessings God has given me. They are the reason I stay strong. I just wish they knew this. Becoming a Mother is MY real dream come true. I treasured every second with my kids *Wink* Thank you for reminding me about the whole reason I am writing my life story take care Marcia...aka Marcy Belle
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