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Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (5.0)
real feelings of a child. all parents should endeavour to stay in knit families so that they won't give the young ones wrong impression
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Review of Trick or Tweet  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
some stories touch the heart; this reaches the spinal cord of the spiritkeep it up
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Review of Last Light  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (4.0)
a poem is good in as far as it touches the soul. yours is good. it has touched my soul . carry on.
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Review of The Heron  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (4.0)
this has the shock of figurative flow.it is as smooth as the marble on the high arched way.
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Review of Whisper Of A Name  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (3.5)
fair
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Review of First Kiss  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
rimingg scheme, good. metre and metricity poor. figures ,average
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Review of Just One Taste  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
this is a winner. your suspense is exhilerating. your figures, wonderful. your plot, a perfection of art. carry on! you will go p[laces
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Review of Angel of Light  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
stirring, entertainig, wishfulfilling, otherworldly; you have done a good work. i wish some angels will not grant our desires in such a sad way
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Review of Feathers  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
very good poem. i love the chaotic nature, debarred of trADITIONAL rules , yet with a hidden set of rules; i love the figures, smooth flowing and frank, they touch the backbone of soul. carry on!
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Review of 'Droid Void  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (5.0)
like this robot our life is programmed and short in face of the masters of destiny , that created us. like this robot we must always act well, to satisfy our masters who created us in the first place. this work is didactive.
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Review of Star Mail  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (4.5)
good creativity
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Review of Port Mayaca  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (5.0)
very beautiful. your figures flow. keep it up
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Review of Fire  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (4.0)
good poem;try to perfect your metres
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Review of Emerald Eyes  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (4.0)
free flowing . full of metaphors
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Review of Tetrapharmakos  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (3.0)
average. please use more imagery. you will do better next time . read my portfolio
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Review by st.ifa
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
good story. but you shouldn't have concentrated on Mars. there are planets out there, suspected by scientists to house people - use one of those. the dogon people of mali believe they descent from epsilion bootes. why don't you weave a fiction around this?
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Review of Letters  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
good work. i like your use of figures
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Review by st.ifa
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
good work. i like the poetic shock
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Review by st.ifa
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
good
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Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (4.0)
good haikus. but improve your thesis and hypothesis contrast
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Review of EVERLONG...  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
just becoming a poet; try harder
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Review of Michael Jackson  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (3.0)
fair. write sonnets , not fre verse. you are better there
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Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (4.0)
i feel illuminated myself. you are good
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Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (4.0)
famous and thus, a weak rime. flow is not there. metaphorsare weak. but strict adherance to metricity. read my sonnets
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Review of Whisper  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (3.5)
good rhyming scheme. average figures. poor metricity. read my portfolio
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