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Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (3.0)
metre ok; figures weak. read my sonnets
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Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (4.5)
we pray no one be as late as him . ever!
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Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (5.0)
per fect stream of consciousness method. you are soyinka of our times
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Review by st.ifa
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
sir,

you should know that the first science stories are from africa. ptahotep in egypt did many science fiction stuff. the vimanasare crafts used in vedic tradition thousands of years ago. orunmila in ife sent sent his two sons to the moon 5000 years ago . Olero in Odeitsekiri in in nigeria used submarines 8bc. look farther for the beginning ofscience fiction. africa is it ; not greece
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Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (3.0)
your initiative is good. but do you consider poems written by africans. i am an african and i have more tham 500sonnets; so many works in iambic metre- pentametre, tetrametre and so on. i even have poems in haikus and trochees. pls tell me if you need my work. see sample in my portfolio. unfortunately , i am not a money-registerd member. my portfolio is rather scanty.

st ifa
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Review by st.ifa
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
you never said if any male approached you in the story. it is fine homosexuality is a natural trait among peoples and animals . read my article in my poetfolio on homosexuality. your metaphors are powerful. isit a true life story. if it is not, you are an excellent story teller.
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Review by st.ifa
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
good
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Review of Clothed in Goo  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (5.0)
wonderful poem. good rimes
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Review of December Bye Bye  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (3.0)
good poem. it would have been better if it had rimes and metres. read mine in the porfolio
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Review of Let's Publish!  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
this opporttunity is a rare one. i will use it. you are an angel to writers
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Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (4.0)
good riming sheme. story line not too good.
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Review of Rhyming Words  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (3.5)
fair
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Review of The Second Time  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
sweet story. i am having a hard on as a result of thr three some
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Review of erotica  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
fine story line very romantic. but next time dont use do complex a vocabulary to describe such mundane affairs as love making. you are good , but use smaller every day words that people will understand easily
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Review of Northern Exposure  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
good story
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Review of The Gift  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (4.0)
this is a good poetic prose. i love your rime of grandeur and splendour. so much imagery. i love you repetition of "She was born". but how come this beautiful scenery in the house of wizards. or are you a witch too. you painted the scenery so beautifully. check my portfolio for my well metred poems.

st ifa
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Review by st.ifa
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
better thann the first part of the book
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Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (3.0)
fair
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Review by st.ifa
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
good story line. but the first part was too scary.
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Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (2.0)
few rimes; weak metre, weak imagery. view my portfolio.
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Review of Darkness  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
try harder
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Review of TO, THE ASLEEP  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
good riming sceme
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Review by st.ifa
Rated: E | (5.0)
good interview
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Review by st.ifa
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
good story
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Review of To Bait a Mouse  
Review by st.ifa
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
fine story. isit real life. it sounds like what happened to me as an infant, too.
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