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True that woman needs to be treated cherished, loved and cared for.
Above all she needs to be understood, her sense and sensibility need to be recognized. Only then, she opens up completely and their life of togetherness comes to fruition.
“Whatever she’s become lies within him”
Cannot agree more.
Structure-
I find it a novel way to have two opinions, two voices I.e. one objective and another subjective fused agreeably.
The tranquil moon shines through the night providing immense pleasure to the lucky viewer.
Hi, I am Jaya reviewing this nice poem with a rhyme and rhythm.
The night is visually evoked with a peacefully sailing silver moon with streaks of crimson.
Crimson streaks do not necessarily stand for an impending storm.
The sky is clear, the moon shines bright, shedding delight.
The poem ends on a note of the divine, where all good things begin and end.
Finding strength you lost is painted in an appealing poem.
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The title is apt, for it suits the content you dealt with.
The joy of being back to yourself comes through quite transparently.
I could visualize the tremendous support and sympathy you were lucky enough to receive from your family and friends.
Both fate and providence seem to have offered a helping hand.
Anything is possible if you have a strong will power besides all the above.
It flows well with vivid imagery and fine word choices.
these verses flow like an immortal river of peace and wisdom. I love the evocative imagery representing “forever”.
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Events connected to the mundane world mentioned in the first part of the poem are harmoniously in balance with those of the sublime.
That, I find is truly amazing.
This life which is a gift of God is fulfilled with life after death.
Thus there is equal importance given to the material life and that of the sublime.
Excellent feelings and thoughts are wrapped in touching metaphors and sensitive expression.
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this a heartening story.
This revolves around a real life situation.
A baseless allegation or a misunderstanding leads a person to be judgmental. But this is a common error albeit serious.
I see the reason behind the title. Thoughts of inconsiderate nature often cause shame.
The story progresses well with a proper beginning. The middle part shows the benign effects of music and its delineation by the artist on a tired soul.
Yet, it has’t taken a moment to replace the good feeling with doubt and dismay. Mind is such thing of contradictions.
The story resolves on a note of probable regret and repentance.
nice to review a story containing warm feelings surrounding a family.
I am glad I found it in your nice portfolio for my reading and reviewing pleasure.
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The elderly lady’s thoughts mirror situations in life. Her fears and pleasures gravitate around her near and dear.
Mike and his family, despite the big storm brewing could make it to reach back to Kate’s house instead of venturing further into the big storm. Looks like the right thing to do with Christmas around the corner.
Characters including Mr. Jenkins have their appeal. Cold winter makes me feel its chill.
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this is a great take on WDC. It has a useful story, aptly expressed in a dialogue.
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This highlights the various aspects and activities that make WDC special and appealing.
I have come across several members for whom WDC is a second home.
No wonder.
There’s tremendous scope for aspiring writers to become full time successful writers. Examples are many.
Everything you said is true because I have been through the experience for years and still there’s room to find more.
Hi,
Nice to read your reflections on meditation. There’s also prayer as a precursor to meditation.
Your thoughts on God are relatable.
He is an integral part of life of a believer, much like mine.
What is significant as far as I could contemplate is that meditation and prayer are parts of a whole.
It is said that while meditating you need to focus on something lovable, like a place, person or God. So, if I visualize and focus on a symbol that represents the sublime to which I supplicate and appeal, it becomes prayer.
You are right about effects of meditation. It certainly helps me to shed burdens on my mind and makes me feel free and relaxed.
Hi Anita,
I can the pain and anguish that rent the soul asunder. I can also visualize ithat you too become a part of this undesirable milieu, like slow poison that absorbs, unless you wake up and realize what’s best for you.
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You wrote a deeply felt poem reflecting reality both from the outside and inside.
Man falls or rises by his own will.
The best thing is you are empowered to choose your own path.
Sometimes it’s unexpectedly good to choose the road less traveled.
the first stanza explains what a love letter is and then you proceed to write one.
“This is a love letter to you”
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You are trying your level best to encourage and inspire the lover, who seems at a low point right now.
You are right. Love is full of feelings, both good and bad.
Hope is the thing that comes with love.
It’s great to hang on to it.
There’s amazing enthusiasm for life in spring in this free style poem.
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Features of both spring and winter are shown in respective images.
For the winter stricken people and places, the sun and winter of March are a welcome change.
“Spring has brought my laughter back”
The sober, solemn and the drab winter undergoes a mercurial change with the onset of spring and summer.
Warm days with cool winds, and overflowing exuberance find a spontaneous expression in this beautiful poem.
Wonderful story on the bonding between the brothers.
Simon is both caring and sensible. His sense of humor stands out. Jamie is quite successfully diverted from being a frightened boy to one who enjoys being a part of his brother’s swashbuckling pirate story. His imagination lights up too.
“I want one with pirates….A dragon!…or may be ….”
An inspiring story for brothers!
Language, style, character and dialogue are excellent.
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expressing your mind through writing is the right way to get your mind cleansed of worry and anxiety.
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I can understand how hurt you are by the circumstances.
But the fact that you are raised by great foster parents balances the hurt and “abuse” you went through.
You say you love your parents. You trust them alright as I understand.
The experiences you had might have taught you the importance of living with satisfaction.
Edit-
“lieing”
(lying)
Use capital I instead of i when you refer to yourself.
Hi Rebecca,
I totally agree with you. We should learn to be grateful for the nice things we are given. One should be particularly thankful if he or she is blessed with good health and able to enjoy life fully.
More often we hear people complaining which could create problems springing from discontent.
“I have learned to love my life everyday,”
If this happens to all, the world would be bereft of discontent.
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Scars are inevitable for every human being. I appreciate the way you justified scars.
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As you rightly pointed out, every life has a story behind it, which is secretive, unknown and less talked about. Often it is hurtful and scary. A person’s effort to get away from its grim shadow, makes his life. Scars do not matter anymore.
“ stitch me shut
Seal wounds
…… cling to some hope.”
It sums up the life with scars.
There’s nothing shameful about scars. They are like a hero’s mementos.
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You told your story with appeal. It sounds like an autobiography in brief. Season, age, place of living, weather, likes , health and social status and tastes are honestly and humorously stated.
All in all, it mirrors a contented and a light spirited person, whom anyone would like to be friendly with as I do.
I like the rhythm and flow of the free style poem.
I appreciate your essay on perfection. My review of it is for your WDC Account Anniversary.
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As you have pointed out, achieving perfection is a good goal. It challenges our abilities and efficiency.
It also serves as an inspiration to do better.
On the other hand, it might put a dampener on one’s enthusiasm. Failure to achieve might cause disappointment, hopelessness and depression.
After achieving the goal, the biggest challenge is to maintain that momentum. It’s humanly impossible to continue with perfection whatever might be field we choose. Brain and body are not forever lucid, young and active.
Working towards perfection is good both physically and mentally. It contributes to our overall wellness and happiness.
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Heart break is shown vividly as a day dawns. What a shock to have discovered that love has left your side and that you find yourself absolutely miserable.
“Pieces lay scattered on the floor…”
Love is not love if it alters at any point in time.
So this is not true love if it’s not steadfast.
It is better to be alone than to trust the wrong person.
Imagery is visual and effect of being lonesome is crystal clear.
Scriptophobia is supposed to spring from some source. It could be a bad experience of writing while in school or working at home.
Ability to imagine but inability to put pen to paper might be due to fear. Fear of being criticized or looked down on. It could also be due to laziness. Writing takes an effort. It needs the writer to gather his thoughts together and write them down with clarity. It should be well organized as well.
It’s really a strange case. I have never come across someone with imagination could not write.
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I notice that you deal with what, why and how regarding subject i.e gold light.
There are two sides to this topic , physical and spiritual.
While it has the golden sun spreading light and joy around world, it could also mean the dawning of spiritual enlightenment that spreads joy through the world.
I find the article vocal enough regarding the effects of “change” in life.
I am glad to note that you have not only defined change, but also gave an example from your personal life. It’s an inspiring example that could help people understand the benefits of change.
I, for one do not welcome change. Yet, when circumstances push me to it, I take it into my stride and get best out of it.
Change certainly makes me not to become too attached to a place, people and routine.
It brings in a soul search persuading a person to see the hidden potential of self.
This is what had happened with me and I appreciate the same.
Hi Tracker,
the nightmare of having a heart attack and coming out of it is very clearly shown.
I find the article informative and useful.
The exact state of mind while you go through it is brought before the reader very well indeed.
Human beings are truly unique. Even under extreme circumstances, you were aware of the past and the possibilities of future.
Congratulations on coming back to normalcy after going through a rough heart condition.
I largely appreciate the conclusion in which you told us the lessons that you learned from the above experience.
Language is lucid and the style is simple and easy.
Looks like an interesting intro to the story you have on your mind.
A twelve year old in a seat of authority, sounds curious. It makes me to want to know the back story that led to the present situation.
Description of the young one and his or her trained emotions certainly makes the reader expect a good story.
She died like the warrior she lived. A warrior of peace and love. I can see the price she paid was high. Obviously, there are people in power, who hated her guts and extracted the price. One voice was silenced. But several others might rise, inspired by her sacrifice.
Hi Turtle ~ KanyáthƐko:wa:h !
It is pleasure reading this haunting story from your port.
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I like the way she controlled the crowd purely by her peaceful attitude.
No wonder the guards too held her in deference.
We all have our heroes of freedom struggle from whom we draw inspiration and try to emulate their courage and selflessness.
Language and style, characters and location win my heart.
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The new snow is like a new playground for the dogs,
When winter comes, outdoors become rather restricted for fear of cold and snow. But as a mild sun breaks through the clouds, it's time to let the dogs out.
I can see the dogs and listen to their barking at the squirrel in the tree and chasing bunnies under the fence.
What cheer it would be to the doggies!
They look obedient to have followed the call and run back into the house hoping for another day of frolic in the snow come tomorrow.
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