This is a sentiment I'm sure everyone who works M-F feels. The rhyming works well and never seems forced. I like how instead of just using one acrostic for Friday, you repeat it 3 times. I have just a couple of suggestions. One is that I don't quite understand what you mean by the line "it doesn't really leave the clues," perhaps this is just in the wrong spot or needs to be worded differently. The other is that I think you could seg-way better into the last stanza, where you are no longer talking about more general pleasures, but are talking about writing and reviewing. Good work! I'd love to get your feedback on some of my stuff sometime.
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