Some people can't seem to tolorate pain. That's alright. nothing wrong with self expression. There are many different ways to express emotion. You can't keep it bottled up inside forever. If you did, you'd be showing some doctor the corner in a round room. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
Some might say that's paranoid thinking, but this day in age, you never can tell until a true test gives you the true answer. You don't even have to set up a test. God will provide it for you. And if they fail the test, and you are gone, don't shed any tears, because they won't be worth shedding tears over. You should feel that you can hold your head high with pride, and go forth to find a true reward elsewhere. Thank you for sharing ths. wrdz
Well said, but it will be falling on the deaf ears of the 235 richest people in this world. That is not sad, it is pathetic! But how can we as people get those 235 richest people to pay enough attention to what is trying to be said here? Greed doesn't have ears to here with. It only has eyes to watch the money come rolling in. It sees nothing else. When the Judgement comes upon us all, those 235 people are going to be in for a well deserved shock. And I hope I can be there to witness it. That will be my "revenge". Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
After-effects of war. How sad that there has to be those kinds of effects of war. I don't know of anything that is positive that comes out of war. Because even if only one life is lost in a 50 year war, it is one life too many to lose.Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
As a retired worker, I say "Thank you". I was forced into retirement by an auto accident that injured me badly enough that I am unemployable. I still like to think that even while I was working, I did all I could to earn my paycheck. Many of my co-workers should have picked up their checks by turning their backs around when handed their paychecks so the boss wouldn't be able to tell it was them (In other words, they should have been ashamed to get their checks for a lack of having done anything to earn it. Oh well. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
Very good discription. I like this piece. Well done. I'm a nature lover by choice. Only kind of shooting I CAN do is with a camera. That way I have something to look at, and nature goes about her way unchanged. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
My brother kind of feels that way. He thinks he is definately going to hell just because of the way he lives now. But I know he's wrong, because he does many things to help others. This is good writing. Don't stop now. Your on a roll. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
Insiteful piece. Who knows; it may well be that this will happen. Only God knows for sure. There very well may be ceatures below that we know nothing of, who may not be able to adapt to change. Therefore speeding up our final demise. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
I could be wrong, but I think the 4th, 8th, 10th, & 12th lines need to be captialized at the begining of each line. Other than that, a good poem. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
Sad. But nonetheless, the Captain did as he should have. He went down with his ship. He should be remembered well for his actions. It may be sad, but none of those who recall, or hear about the act can ever say anything negative. That makes even me want to pop the buttons off of my t-shirt. Just to know about how a man can know of his own fate, and still do what must be done to die with honor.
This seems to be deeply personal. Anytime a person exposes themselves in this way, they are very volnurable. It is good to sometimes express yourself in this way as you need a release of some kind if you don't have any other way. God will bless you by helping you to find the right way to express your innermost feelings. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
Nicely done. It brings back thoughts of my very first child. What amazement! To think that I had that kind of power. To help in the creation of another human being. My first real creation. God does some miraculous things through us. We need to remember that more often. Thank you for sharing this. It is very good as it is.
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