The saying about "Time flys when your having fun." takes on a whole new perspective after reading this piece. You have given a reminder that there IS another meaning to that phrase. Thank you for that. And, thank you for sharing this wrdz
Quite an imagination. Very well done. We all have need to sit and let our imagination go active.If it were not for having an imagination, we might end up putting footprints on the ceiling. We especially need to be able to have the romantic aspect included in our imagination, for without the romance, there might not be any thing to spark us into being curious about what romance is. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
Whoever thought up the rules for the english language, nedds firstly, to be shot. Thank you for your "modernization of the english language". We nedded that! Thank you for sharing this. We need some lightening of the pressures of being grammerically correct. wrdz
It will take a long time to complete the circling of eternity. I doubt there will ever be an end to this "trip" around it. Gets me to trying to imagine doing such a "trip". Even though I never will be able to imagine it being completed. Good writing. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
Cute. You will be growing into you whether you are in your room, or anywhere else in this world. And you know what? God will be right there with you all the way. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
That is called true faith. No amount of words are enough to praise such a strong feeling. That only comes from having God in your corner.Thank you so much for sharing this. Nicely done!!! wrdz
Can you see why writing keeps you sane? It's a way of expressing those emotions that you have no one to express those emotions to. Sure, you have friends you can talk to, but no one to truly confide in. So, you put those thoughts and emotions down on paper, or on your computer. Everyone has need of getting the emotions out of their system. Don't feel lonely or ashamed there. That's just part of being human. Be proud of those emotions. They're your emotions (a part of who you are). Don't ever forget to remember: Always go with God, for He always goes with you. (Sorry for getting so carried away with my "Soap box" chatter.)
Only by asking God for the help needed can she be truly set free. The confusion created by the piece is what I see when I read this piece. That's not meant in a bad way. I look at those things she is confronted by, and I see many things bombarding her all at once, and that causes the confusion for me. It would be too hard to keep it all sorted out. I hope I got the right message. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
The land is not silent during the night. I worked the midnight to eight shift for 21 years. The night is not silent. It only "seems" silent to those who have not been in those areas where the night never sleeps. Thank you for sharing this wonderful, wishful, and sometimes believed in piece. It was nice to have my dream put to verse. Thank you for that. wrdz
Nicely done piece. I only saw two misspellings. They were the same word. god. This is always capitalized.
Other than this, it's very good. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
Well written piece, but some spelling and misuse of capitalization.
Spelling:
Tenth line down - "Our brand new in-laws asking when will we begun" Should be "...when will we begin"
Eighteenth line down - "We've had our bumps and wholes in the road," Should be "We've had our bumps and holes in the road,"
Twenty third line down - "I will hold your hand until the Day I die." Should be "I will hold your hand until the day I die."
Other than some somall things, this is very good. I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
This is beautiful. But I noticed some spelling mistakes."Angle" is spelled Angel
"birth day" is spelled birthday
"god" is ALWAYS capitalized (God)
You might want to use your spelling/grammar checker to help make some of these corrections for you. Otherwise, A well done piece. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
Very nicely done. A tribute through a promise. We should all feel that way some day. Some are like you; lucky to be able to know that feeling now. And not have to wait to feel it after we are gone.
Hate when that happens! LOL Good job of looking at yourself through the eyes of a poem written by... who else? You. Nice job. Keep it up. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
Because the right person has not found you yet. God has you here for a reason, and He'll not change that until the time is right. Have faith. Talk to God and ask Him how long you have to wait. He'll give you an answer when the time is right for that, too. Patience may run short, but you have got to have patience or it will spoil the end result. And the end result can be well worth the wait.
But, what ever REALLY happened to all the dragons? They must have existed some time. Now, they will live on in infamy. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
They are out there, just few and far in between. Many who think as I do.
What Is A Woman
She is someone with feelings.
She is someone with needs.
She is someone who is understanding.
She is someone who is caring and concerned.
She is someone with self-respect and pride.
She is someone deserving of much more
Than to be taken for granted.
She is someone to be revered for all of her achievements
Regardless how big or small.
She is someone entitled to much more than she gets.
She is a human being.
She is love.…
And I will remember her….
Always.
Keep on looking. DO NOT GIVE UP! You will find him, for he is out there.
Very deep thinking. When I think, I usually end up in some sort of trouble. So I try not to think very much.
I just wish I could write like this. Mine are usually just junk things. Nicely done. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
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