Closing:
I enjoyed reading this work. (By the way, I'm kind of new at this, so if you see any errors on my part, don't be afraid to let me know. That is how we do better is by knowing our faults, and trying to work on them. Thank you for sharing this work. wrdz
It is I, who will be "paying" you gift points. Items like this are not worthy of someone taking gift points for reviewing with a minimum of 250 characters or more. You should be recieving 250 points or ,ore for such good works. The gift points to me are automatice, I know, but I am adding another 250 points to you to make my point. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
We can all stand a strong reminder of this. Now, it's getting some to "drink the water" as you have lead the horse to the trough. Thank you for sharing this. John
Nice job of giving wrdz some different angles to be seen from. Thank you for sharing this piece. wrdz
(I couldn't resist your title to this piece, since my handle is wrdz thanks, again.)
Fabulous writing (still). You will never be able to put out bad writing as long as you stay on this track. Thank you so much for sharing this. Merry CHRISTmas, Countrymom. wrdz
You pretty much summed things up. I enjoyed reading this piece. There's nothing to be gained by stretching this out, as I don't believe in taking gift points from things written about God, or Christ. That makes me feel like I'm taking advantage of Him. So, I will not accept the gift points, but your work is good. I did enjoy reading it. Thank you for sharing this.
These two pieces are both very good, and positive in attitude. The first, a fitting tribute to a fallen sibling. The second a positive attitude about life itself. Thank you for sharing these. wrdz
Emotional, heartwrenching, and all the other wrdz that go with it. Nicely done. If your mother could read this, I think she would probably approve of your finishing it. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
Very well done. I find it hard to put things into wrdz anymore. I feel my time grows short in my "writing career". I am no professional to start with. I used to put things down as I thought of them, but anymore, I just can't seem to do that anymore. I enjoyed this piece as you did a nice job of describing things as you went along. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
Nicely done piece. But in the fourteenth line, did you mean hide, or high tide? I may be getting picky, but that is something that caught my eye as I read it. It read better as high tide to me. Just a thought. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
You bet! And if I get the chance now and then, I'll be there to respond in kind to your aspiring poet's delight. Good work, girl. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
Very nice prayer. But I found reference mistakes. The second line, Lord should have a capital letter. And line six Your is a reference word to God or Lord, and needs to be capitalized. Line seven, the same thing again, Lord needs to have a capital letter. I had an English teacher who drilled this into me all through high school. That was in 1964 through 1966. To this day in 2006, I will remember that, and I'm only a want-to-be writer. Not meaning to be critical, but details are looked at by many others also. Keep on writing, 'cause that is what we are all about here, and you are included in our "family". Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
Sounds like an incarceration piece. Nothing bad about that. I seems to be a way for you to vent your emotions. That's good. The day will come when we will all be set free. And we will have nothing to fear. Even those who have past on, are waiting still for the day when we can all know that we are free for eternity. Until that time, just keep on praying for your salvation. I am, and I'm not even incarcerated
That brings back so many memories for me, too. I remember when my uncle went from the thrashing machine to a brand new combine. It took a little practice to get used to the combine, but once it was "mastered, my uncle was fine with the new way of retrieving the grain. Thank you for the vivid memory. A job well done on your part (in more ways than one. wrdz
Open expression of emotions. Good job. At least we know nothing drastic happened because you are still here writing. And writing helps release those pent up emotions. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
"Strength - Self-made" might be what comes to my mind (what little I have left). That is what came to me after reading this untitled piece. That is what I think of as the title for this work. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
Praying will help to take away the anxiety. As long as you maintain your faith and trust in He who can and will rectify the situations in your life. For He is the ONLY one who CAN and WILL change things making them right for you. Thank you for sharing this very nicely written piece. wrdz
Just as a baby is born, begining a new life, so is a new day born, starting us with a clean slate. May all your days be clean and bright. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
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