Closure:
This is a list of clues, but for what? I sense a puzzle, but nothing to be seen when all the pieces are put together. I don't really understand it. But then I never understand quantum physics either. I don't care how much they try to explain it to me. I have to give this only one thumb up for effort at least.
Beginning:
Your opening draws intrest of the reader.
Body:
You tell of the general plite of most people throughout the rest of this work.
Closure:
Your last two stanzas give a different view of opportunity for you as you "get lucky" enough to find what we all seek. This work is good I think. I give it two thumbs up.
Beginning:
Your opening stanza tells of an intriguing Angel. This gets and holds the reader.
Body:
You "highlight some on the angel. That gives the reader an idea about this entity.
Closure:
The last stanza tells of you, and your ability for compassion. This work gets two thumbs up. Nice work, but don't give out too much of yourself. Keep others wondering more about the writer. Mystery is good.
Beginning:
Mysterious opening draws ones curiousity.
Body:
As this work unfolds, it becomes apparent why the first two lines are so mysterious. The mysterious questions are answered.
Closure:
By the last two lines, tears were welting in my eyes; and I'm a veteran of the viet Nam Era. The sadness is something I will never get used to. This work gets two thumbs up for such good presentation. Thank you for sharing it. Merry CHRISTmas. wrdz
Title:
A Pause In Time Beginning:
You open this work with what seems to be a defensive mood. Body:
As this work progresses, the tone seems to slowly change over to a more positive mood. By works end, you have hope in your wrdz. Closure:
I enjoyed reading this work, although it took me a couple of times of reading it, but not to worry. I do that with almost every work I review. That is just me. Not anything to do with you, or the work itself.
I'm wrdz, (again) and this is my review of this work.
Title:
Faith And Hope
Beginning:
Although it is only two stanzas, it is still opened very nicely.
Body:
Both stanzas bring to light the idea that there will come a time when we will all meet the same event. It will be no different for any one of us. And even though we will all greet the same event, no one will have any forewarning about the event itself. It will not change for anyone.
Closure:
This is a very good tribute to a friend whos faith and hope shown through and was recognized. I give this work a two thumbs up.
Body:
Telling of times goneby, but extremely special.
Closure:
It may appear to be the same old thing said just a little differently, but one should never tire of hearing it; even at any other time of the year as well. I give it a two thumbs up
Title:
You set the scene well in your first stanza Beginning:
To have two siblings willing to "duke it out with wrdz" keeps the yelling and screaming to a minimum anyway. Body:
Your observations throughout this work are very well put. Closure:
I enjoyed reading this work. I also think highly of you for the permission footnote. Two thumbs up for this work.
Title:
Don't Let Your Hopes Down Beginning:
Your opening stanza says it all really. Nice start. Body:
This work sounds like it has a lot of negativeness to it, but that, in this case is just facing the reality of things. Closure:
Overall, I enjoyed reading this work. It helps to be reminded once in a while that we can't always walk away a 100 percent winner. Nice job on this work. It gets two thumbs up in my book.
Beginning:
You give something to base this work on.
Body:
I can't seem to follow where this is leading to. Questions such as...?
Closure:
I don't feel real comfortable about not knowing where this work is leading me. But you state that we are lost souls, but what are we not conforming to?
Body:
You take the reader to points the reader may not like to go to, but, hey! That's part of life; and so is death a part of life.
Closure:
I enjoyed reading this work as it was well written. A badly written work, I would not enjoy reading. I give this a two thumbs up score. Thank you for sharing it. wrdz
Beginning:
This work starts out being set on a "solid" stage.
Body:
There is good description throughout the work. I found it to be easy to follow, along with continuous descriptions to keep me on track.
Closure:
This work closes with a sad ending that in order to be truly happy, she has to stay by her grave. That seems very sad to me to have to do something like that in order to find true closure for yourself. You did a very good job on this work, and I give it two thumbs up.
{c;red}Begining:
Your opening is surly an eye opener.
Body:
The maain part of this work reminds us of the fact that there is a cross, and that there is also sunshine that falls on that cross casting a shadow on everything on earth. Therefore, we stand reminded that through that cross, we are saved.
Closing:
This work needs no assistence from anything. It stands on its own very solidly. Thank you for sharing this work. wrdz
Body:
This work sends a signal of joy and happiness that we need more of.
Closing:
This work is very upbeat and can't seem to do anything less than make the reader happy (at least me anyway). I give it a two thumbs up. Thank you for sharing it. wrdz
Begining:
Your first stanza sets things up nicely.
Body:
The last line of the third stanza,"Drop, any, drop, one, drop, this." What did you say there? It lost me as if there were more wrdz to be included. Am I reading this part wrong or what? In the next stanza, you repeat the begining again and continue on from there. I feel there is a loss of flow at this point. Help me to understand that part.
Closing:
Other than the above possible misunderstanding on my part, this seems to be a good work. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
Body:
I sense "desparation" in this work. But we need that to an extent, so it seems appropriate here. It seems to get more evident that there is a failure between two people which hope seem to fade in the end, but you always want to keep some hope alive to the bitter end.
Closing:/c}
Coming back to reality, you state about only sleeping, which lets me know you have not lost yourself in this work, but expressed your feelings well. Thank you for sharing this work. A nice job. wrdz
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