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Rated: E · Book · Drama · #2319583

An experimental collection of exactly 100 words (mostly)

#1091678 added June 17, 2025 at 6:38am
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Pretty Please?
I've waited long for such a love,
It's more than overdue
Now you're here, I'm glad as can be
You mean so much, it's true.

Don't let me down as others have
I'd feel awful, you know.
My heart was made for you alone
I'd hurt to see you go.

No treasures fix a broken heart
No beauty can compare
To true love's glow upon the soul
Like fresh, sweet summer air.

Now you know how I treasure you
More than all the world
Can you promise that you will be
My one and only girl?


Words: 96
8-6-8-6 syllables, ABCB rhymes.
Not quite a drabble due to poetic restrictions.
Written for Rachel's Beatles Challenge.
Chosen song: Don't Let Me Down


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