Funny, as I first read through your poem, I paused at those lines "before time snaps back" and thought, "I love that." Then I see it's new. Great poem, Brian.
Got a hook, no musical talent, wear the hell outta it with that invention…I noticed (somewhere between the Waitresses and Debbie Harry with a nod to Toni Basil):
No hate. Respect. *thumps chest appropriate number of times* *finger pistols* (non-aggressively)
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Great poem, Brian.
Dreams feel good though. Thanks for posting this one, Brian 
