Funny, as I first read through your poem, I paused at those lines "before time snaps back" and thought, "I love that." Then I see it's new. Great poem, Brian.
Look at the desperate man
Clutching with broken hands
Wondering how it ends
Stumbling back and forth
Looking to start a war
I'm lucky he was a friend
Wait
Take me apart and I'll flow like water slowly fade
I'm disappearing again
He would've risked it all
He wanted to heed the call
This was the last attempt
But as he turns to go
A broken voice cuts through the cold
"This ain't how it ends"
Wait
Take me apart and I'll flow like water slowly fade
I'm disappearing again
Time and space, there's never enough and I don't mind waiting for
The day
Everyone here will go mad
Wait
Take me apart and I'll flow like water slowly fade
I'm disappearing again
Time and space, there's never enough and I don't mind waiting for
The day
Everyone here will go mad
I was the foolish man
Living to fight again
But dying to find the end
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