A second attempt at "Give It 100!" , since the first one ("100" ) turned out pretty well even though I didn't complete it within 100 days.
These are just rough sketches and ideas that are barely a little more rounded-out...they're not perfect but they're gonna be good enough to share here at least. Your comments, support, and words of encouragement will be greatly appreciated!
Ooh, I feel like this is full of potential, but somehow unfinished. I really like the first half, up to 'with an all-knowing smirk'. After that it loses me a little I think.
My body is a road map of natural disasters.
Hurricane hips, shoulder mudslides,
calves of drought, and a head
that doesn't know if it's comin' or goin'
in whiteout blizzard conditions.
Along the way I stop at tourist attraction pills
to gas up the tank and fix the flats
but the luggage rack's a little shaky
and locals never seem to like me.
The journey of a hundred trigger points
starts with the first flare-up,
where every day is a new discovery
of what hurts the most.
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