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Rated: GC · Book · Personal · #2123453

GI100 Book #2...random attempts at poetry.

A second attempt at "Give It 100!Open in new Window., since the first one ("100Open in new Window.) turned out pretty well even though I didn't complete it within 100 days.

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These are just rough sketches and ideas that are barely a little more rounded-out...they're not perfect but they're gonna be good enough to share here at least. Your comments, support, and words of encouragement will be greatly appreciated!


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July 23, 2017 at 6:50pm
July 23, 2017 at 6:50pm
#916004
7-21-17


I hear noises
and I can never tell where
they're coming from.
Pipes rattling. Strangers' voices.
Rustling bushes. The selfish anger in prayers.
I'm driven by needing to know.
Curiosity becomes instinctual habit
with every headspin my neck produces.
I can withstand what I can see
but visualization isn't optional.
Existence to believe          belief exists.
If          something from somewhere,          then
         here to there.
July 23, 2017 at 6:55pm
July 23, 2017 at 6:55pm
#916005
7-21-17


you are inside me
         like knowledge
         like poetry
the arteries commanding
blood expanding
ivy in the dead heat
of summertime preparing
         to dry
         to die
         to come back
         to reply
a sentence ending
unafraid unchanging
         with a semicolon
         with a death
         with an all-knowing smirk
of composure in
the face of scathing drama
you make me me
         see
like a mute viper
noon delights for dinner
waken with appetite
         spoke little
         spoke sent
more or less
         you
         equal
         everything
July 23, 2017 at 7:00pm
July 23, 2017 at 7:00pm
#916006
7-22-17


Are you prepared to suck the same poison?
In the deepening slope of nows
your options whittle themselves down to
finally celebrating your mistakes;
every facet of life equals party and
every facet of party equals life until
there is no difference between anything
and that's when you realize you're
dying not at the hand you were given
but the one you chose to play. But
you were dead anyway, right?
There are millions of synapses firing
while you're waiting for the gun
to shoot...and any one of them
has a different and/or better resolution.
July 23, 2017 at 7:03pm
July 23, 2017 at 7:03pm
#916007
7-22-17


The view was lopsided
but we would make it;
5500km give or take.
Time-honed and precious...
soft as water-sanded stone
and similarly we can grow
through a mildly muted
subtraction that sees us
bond over what we traverse.
Not having to rely on
technology puts our focus
more directly on each other.
A welcome, and eventually
relaxing, change.
July 23, 2017 at 7:07pm
July 23, 2017 at 7:07pm
#916008
7-23-17


You're in retrograde again...
sparking and pinging
nothing of note but
noticed enough anyway.
Nineteen and a half years ago
you might've been crazy
but you're just a generation
too late for asylum existence.
Take these pills and
take some more until you
can't take anymore and
we'll try to tell you when you've
had enough. If you can
stay awake through your pain
we'll inform you you're famous
long enough for a following
before you vanish mysteriously
again into yourself.

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