A second attempt at "Give It 100!" , since the first one ("100" ) turned out pretty well even though I didn't complete it within 100 days.
These are just rough sketches and ideas that are barely a little more rounded-out...they're not perfect but they're gonna be good enough to share here at least. Your comments, support, and words of encouragement will be greatly appreciated!
Ooh, I feel like this is full of potential, but somehow unfinished. I really like the first half, up to 'with an all-knowing smirk'. After that it loses me a little I think.
The drama in the air has gone from
concerning to normal.
The void is now the now,
and we're all dying to float;
dying to try.
The middle ground is gone;
it evaporated into
feelings attaching
to the tops of bottoms
and bottoms of tops.
The side you're on
is the one that was chosen for you.
I guess this is where we live now.
It went
from the way there
into the way.
We're never building a new one;
we're always adding on.
Normalization of the negative space
has sucked the air out of you
and you're dying to float,
or at least you're
dying to try.
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