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| I went up to the dark purple coated, tall man standing under the task sign. This was the first challenge in order to unlock level 25. The man smiled at me as I reached him. It will take a couple days for them to prepare it. The tasks were always different and only nine people at a time were allowed to do it. It was the key to face the master of the Grassy Path. The task would be on that path. He smiled at me. "Welcome Lilah. You came on time. Please to register. Your task will be ready in a couple of days. You will not be able to move forward untijl you beat the Master of Grassy Path. He has watched you train and I will admit he admires your skills. He will not go easy on you." The main bowed his head as I made it to the computer tablet. "I am Mitsu by the way. Mitsu Afili." "It is a pleasure to meet you and I won't disappoint you. I will beat the Master of the Grassy Path." I signed my name. "Good. Come back here in two days and I will tell you the plans. Your healer outfit is leveled quite well." "Thank you." I went to the bank. A suspicious figure was there. Then I recognized him. He was the one I first fought when I got my spiders. Andrew and Kelsey. It had to be spiders. Yet I would've needed to face them anyway. A store. This was the same outfit store. I could change there easily. Now to begin my start of Quakelisa. My senses told me he was up to no good and had to be stopped before he entered the bank. I dashed over to the store and changed to my epic outfit. Perfect. My disguise was simple, but less likely I would be caught. Then I went outside. I could feel the eagerness Joe and Lily had. They were ready. All the better. Then I headed inside the bank. Chaos spread all across the area. He was attacking. "Stop right there. You can't win against me." I shouted. "So, we meet again, Lilah. Your pathetic mask doesn't hide your identity well." He calmly said. Just then my rival Mack entered in his disguise. "Hand over the money, and we will let you leave. Otherwise, we will pummel you down to the ground and force you to beg for mercy." Mack said beside me. "I am Quakelisa, and don't forget that. You got the wrong person." I choked out. "A battle it is. If I win, I keep the money and your creatures. If I lose, then I will return the money and be on my way. You two look week. Master will be pleased to have your creatures." Then he laughed. I still didn't know his name. The battle started. He had eight creatures this time instead of two, all level five. This should be an easy matter. Joe and Lily went to work while Mack's creatures went to work too. We used our ultimates, not the ones we just gained. But battling him was another matter. It seemed as if he was from outer space. The powers we had, but not of our level either. We KOed him easily, together. My speed was faster. Then we smiled at eeach other. Rivals, or friends? I returned the money bags to the bank teller and dragged the thief out. Word Count: 580 Bradbury |
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