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THE STORY
A solider lays flags on graves.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked the emotional sentiment behind the man laying flags on the graves.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the 3rd person omniscent. Past tense is used in the story.
DIALOGUE
There is an internal dialogue which accents emotional points.
OPENING PARAGRAPH
The opening paragraph sets the stage for the flag placement. There's a sense of duty, but there's also underlying emotional beat that the reader will soon discover.
CHARACTERS
The man placing the flags finds a deeper meaning to the gesture of placing flags on military graves.
The artist went home to grab some water for her exhibit at the museum. Her home was just a block away. Once she reached home, she noticed something was amiss. So she walked to the kitchen to find the sink flooded with water. Turning off the faucet, she noticed the water had gone all over the floor. All she needed was a vial of water. She called her husband to come home immediately and clean the kitchen. Then she hurried back to the museum. Her exhibit looked parched. Quickly, she put on the spray top and sprayed her exhibit. It came to life. Then someone walked up to it and announced he was ready to buy it and made an offer she and the museum couldn't refuse. The trip home was worth it.
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