My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE STORY
A solider lays flags on graves.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked the emotional sentiment behind the man laying flags on the graves.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the 3rd person omniscent. Past tense is used in the story.
DIALOGUE
There is an internal dialogue which accents emotional points.
OPENING PARAGRAPH
The opening paragraph sets the stage for the flag placement. There's a sense of duty, but there's also underlying emotional beat that the reader will soon discover.
CHARACTERS
The man placing the flags finds a deeper meaning to the gesture of placing flags on military graves.
You got me. I was in a rush to get in as many points as possible and I made a big mistake. Did I post an entry that had an earlier date than you would like? But it was in April. I just didn't post right away when I had the chance. I do have later posts too that I could also pull up quickly to replace that post. Well, mistakes happen. I know you're watching the dates and I'm trying to earn points fair and square. I think I'll leave it at that. I don't think I'm breaking the rules here but just to be safe. This is a fair confession. All of my writings, or most of them, will be up to date. You'll see a lot of poetry from me after all. I did a fair amount of reviewing but it takes time to review.
15. You've broken the GoT rules. Justify it in 500 words or less. Points: 1,000
Word Count: 148
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