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THE STORY
A solider lays flags on graves.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked the emotional sentiment behind the man laying flags on the graves.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the 3rd person omniscent. Past tense is used in the story.
DIALOGUE
There is an internal dialogue which accents emotional points.
OPENING PARAGRAPH
The opening paragraph sets the stage for the flag placement. There's a sense of duty, but there's also underlying emotional beat that the reader will soon discover.
CHARACTERS
The man placing the flags finds a deeper meaning to the gesture of placing flags on military graves.
Meet Rocky! A Rainbow Dragon attuned to the elements of the seven continents. His strength is the ability to be able to control any element at will. However, he can't mind control the elements of others, but he can defend himself from their attacks and attack back. Rocky lives in Antartica, away from civilization. However, he gets lonely and will travel to other continents in search of companionship and company. He loves to speak in riddles and give out wisdom to those who will listen. Those who listen often become rich and famous because of him. Those who don't listen become poor and homeless. He doesn't realize the extent of his powers. However, he uses his powers for good, controlling the seasons as they arrive.
Prompt: Dragon to represent 7 continents
Word Count: 125
Activity: Westeros
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