My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE STORY
A parrot helps Captain O'Leary solve the Cop Shop Mystery on Founder's Day.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked how Captain O'Leary was inspired to flush the crooks out in the open. True Genius!
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the 3rd person omniscient. Past tense is used in the story.
DIALOGUE
The dialogue drives the narration.
OPENING PARAGRAPH
The opening paragraph sets up the dilemma who stole the loot. There are a lot of suspects, but some are more suss than others.
CHARACTERS
The characters are highly entertaining and keep the readers engaged. Bingo had to be my favorite, but Brimley and Polly Wanda Cracka were a hoot in their own comedic ways.
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