by Max Griffin
Show Don't Tell Contest Message Forum
Welcome to the SHOW DON'T TELL Contest!
Show, don't tell! How many times have you heard that? We all know it's one of the toughest things to do. Some editors and agents will decide whether or not to read your submission based only on how well your first sentence does this. Our contest is all about showcasing and practicing this important skill.
The most basic rule for our contest is that you must show all the facets of your story as opposed to telling them. Each month, we'll give you four or five sentences that will serve as a story prompt. Your task will be to write a story that includes the information in the prompt. You will need to show that information--along with all the other aspects your story. This contest is all about showing and not telling.
January, 2019 prompt
Ruby wakes in the morning to learn the schools are closed due to a snowstorm the previous night.
Ruby is delighted and prepares to spend the day with her beloved twins.
Mid-day, Ruby has coffee with her neighbor, Linda, who is uncomfortable when Ruby mentions the children are outside playing in the snow.
After reading a nap-time story for the twins, Ruby sets the table and prepares dinner.
When her husband, Joe, comes home and sees the four place-settings, he's sad and says something to Ruby.
Ruby has an emotional reaction to what Joe says.
Notes. You can choose any emotional reaction for Ruby that you like: laughter, fear, relief, panic, or something else. It's up to you. You can make your entire story consist of the above six items, or just use these for the opening. The only rule is that they must all be present, and shown, not told. Finally, if you'd rather have a male protagonist, feel free to change "Ruby" to "Roscoe."
In order to be sure all entries receive a fair reading, we will limit the number of entries in each contest round to ten. Entries are first-come-first served, so enter early! You may enter only once in each round, but you may enter every contest round if you wish.
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The November 2018 round of the contest is closed. Congratulations to our winners.
Come back for our next round, starting
January 1, 2019.