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Review of Zoe's Return, Chapter 3
by A Non-Existent User
Title of Story: Zoe’s Return

Chapter #: 3

Author: Pat

Setting: Hollywood post-premiere party

Characters: Zoe and Kevin (main characters)

Referencing: Good – no issues

Plot: Zoe wants Kevin, but something is holding her back

Grammar: No issues

General:

“Why?” s ehshe demanded, suspicion frosting her tone.


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Review of Zoe's Return, Chapter 3 · 01-18-08 7:54am
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Re: Review of Zoe's Return, Chapter 3 · 01-18-08 2:07pm
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