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Jan 18, 2008 at 4:12pm
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Re: Review: Southern Cross: Chapter 1: Seawhippet
Sephina,

Thanks much for your review and advice on my Chapter 1. I think as you begin to read the next two chaps, you will see that the adverbs are slowly (HA!) shrinking from view.

And yes, there will be more description of Hanna's house. I am just trying to intro characters first. The majority of the action will take place at Ian's Lighthouse, which you will soon read about and get a MAJOR description. Also, Hanna's REAL home - SeaGate – back on the Outer Banks. I don't want to give too much away but dark, sexy and bloody times are coming ...

Again, Thanks. I will be getting to your own material very soon.

Cheers,
Scott
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Review: Southern Cross: Chapter 1: Seawhippet · 01-18-08 2:01pm
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