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Sep 23, 2008 at 2:09pm
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Re: Review: Behind the Wall, Ch 6 by Carol Marsella
hanks so much, Tim. I appreciate the time you take to review me, especially knowing the
slow pace drives you to distraction!

I read along nodding my head and find I agree with everything you have noted. (And, yes,
there were a couple of head slaps in there. LOL) I'll be editing the chapter asap.


Having purchased this wonderful new book Max recommended, (I think you bought it,
too?) I have a better handle on how to open the chapter. Think I can make my narration a
bit more colorful. Can I ask you to check it out again, after I work on it? (It'll
be a while.)

Thanks again,
Carol


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