The WDC NanoLounge

Thanks for the advice! I think part of the problem is that in my first chapter she is experiencing major stress, and is forced to hold in a lot of her emotions in, in order to protect her physical well-being (i.e. she has to keep her mouth shut so she doesn't get killed). I think in the next chapter she's probably going to let out all of her emotions in one big burst, so that should help the reader get to know her better.
Congratulations on your word count! Seeing that it is possible to write as many words as you have, in such a short period of time, is really inspiring. It's pushing me to write as much as I possibly can.
Ali