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Dec 9, 2013 at 4:50pm
Could you please reveiw
I am new at writing poetry.This is my first piece.Could you please tell me what you think ,as well as where I would put punctuation marks.
 The Noisy Boy  (E)
#1965053 by pamela still
Could you please reveiw · 12-09-13 4:50pm
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