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Jan 19, 2014 at 4:38pm
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Frightening Experience be found in My Erotica
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Review of Lof or Obsession

Initial Respons: There are two sides to every story. What it Marks? I think he is a bent prick, and you know what they say about a prick.It just sticks around, most of the time inside ass other than his wife's Playboys get theirs, but what happened to send Kaye on the prowl. She made a mistake and fucks Jane's husband and now she's pregnant. I think it thing the move it up to Jane. Mark seems to like woman well and that's bad, especially when he's a married man..

Suggestions: Tell me more of the story.What happened to cause this obsession with woman. There is two sides to Every story. This has very good potential keep writing.



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