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Feb 23, 2014 at 8:58am
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Hi,
I am trying to brush up my poetry writing skills. I've written two versions of the same poem and cannot decide by myself which one to keep and which one to trash. Please read and let me know which one of the two is a better poem. Review only the one which you approve of. I would really appreciate criticism and suggestions.

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When marriage isn't a choice but an imposition.
#1978511 by Ruhi Sonal


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Kindly review · 02-23-14 8:58am
by Ruhi Sonal

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