Reviewing with River

Off-topic, but on topic: I'm always wanting to know how my poetry makes the reader feel. Did the imagery (if any) resonate with you? did it make sense? if it was plain and straightforward, did that makes sense as a choice? and at least as importantly, did any of the areas trip you up as you were reading it - did the flow of lines break because the the meter was off-balance? If it worries you, try reading it aloud a few times. Some poems are harder than others, but if you're getting tongue-tied in the same spot every time, it might be worth mentioning.

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