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HI, i'mMary Ann McPhedran, and I have joined Rivers to enhance my reviewing skills.
I'm a premium member, and I have never used a ten plate or the tool I give a fair review, and although I have never given a review on Mythology I reviewed it as best as I could.
First I'm always honest and courtiouse to the author. I wrote my review on the points as I found them.

I commented on the design of the item and the written piece as well as the structure
and the storyline. I commented on the story and gave praise to the author for good creation and imagery.

The way the author described his surroundings of the place the story was revolved around. The authior gave a good descripted colourful detail of the event and the bird in flight mythology story was like an enchanted forest and I enjoyed the story and the experience took me outsude my comfort Zone and was a challenge. I found the story to be a good asset for a follow up story and I suggested this to the author. A joy to read keep writing

This review was written onthe 4/4/18 by MARY ANN MCPHEDRAN.
{Mary Ann MCPhedran Newbie Academy

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