Reviewing with River

Re update April topic A quote let's dance well I for one felt like dancing when I put my new skills to the test at my writers group in my home town.I never developed the comment part especially giving a bad comment to a fellow writer until I entered tuission with River.Our group leader suggestd to one of our writers to takea word out of her exsibbet and I said no she just has to put .note saying the meaning of the word which was doucing which means dampening down.

{Mary Ann MCPhedran Angle's Army}
{Mary Ann MCPhedran Newbie Academy.}