Noticing Newbies

I need to know if my phrasing is clear in this poem "The Townhall Clock" 
One reviewer felt in stanza 8 the words "We all have the problem" were confusing. He suggested "We all have the same problem" or "We all have this problem" . In about stanzas 6 and 7 I described several types of people and asked if you were one of these people. My feeling was we all have part of the problem, and then I continued "it's time that we share it."
I'd like opinions on 1) if it seems clear as it's written, 2) if I should change it to one of his suggestions, or 3) I think I might change it to "We're part of the problem, it's time that we share it."