Reviewing with River

So here's the review in it's entirety, it shows kind of what her criteria is and how she averages her rating. I have to say, I told her I might be sending her some other stories to review because she's super thorough, but after writing other pieces and giving it some thought, I'm not sure these guidelines wouldn't be a mistake to use. I guess it's just based on whatcha got. I thought it would be interesting to post here though, because it seemed so original. (The story I submitted wasn't my favorite, btw. I had written a condensed version of it for another contest and got a generally good review, with the comment that it could be expanded upon if I wanted to explore making the story broader. Not a good idea for this particular contest, I guess...

Review of "Full Disclosure "

-TPB