Reviewing with River

I appreciate any review. Whether it's for my books or a story. The one's I appreciate the most are the ones who take the time to mix, edits and plot suggestions.
If you have no idea what POV stands for the review that includes a brief mention to watch POV is a wasted reiview. I will highlight a section then give an example of how it might look with a POV change, or tense, or whatever the issue is. I don't recommend rewriting the whole piece, but inserting a different way of portraying what they have wrong. Show what it means compared to the Telling they did.

It was my suggestions to a fellow writer that got me the job to rewrite her entire novel. She even called me the other day and said, "I think we can cut this section too." Yea!!



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