Reviewing with River

bobturn
I'm in agreement. I'd love to talk about bits and pieces of what we write and review if it follows what we're trying to say. i.e. "Does this line/paragraph impart enough information or describe my character with enough emotion or description?"
We could post sections of a scene we are struggling with and get feedback on how to improve it.
Sine we are busy writing, getting that timely feedback helps as we try to move forward. It may be plot hole we are trying to figure.
Good call.