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Jan 4, 2021 at 11:08am
Re: winter magic
         Thank you for your intriguing contribution. The midwinter imagery evokes a cold you can feel. The line "tree sap" threw me off just a little. It seems out of place among the water imagery, but then I begin to see it as perhaps the river you speak of. It is, in any case, a brilliant addition; without it, it's simply "oh, that's nice." Its presence introduces a need for a reader's interpretation. Beautiful. I sincerely hope you grace us with your work again!
winter magic · 01-04-21 8:07am
by eyestar~
*Star* Re: winter magic · 01-04-21 11:08am
by Blimprider

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