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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Fantasy · #1359245

You can swap your head onto different bodies and control them. What will you do?

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Chapter #20

It works! But Something Goes Wrong!

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Jan turns to Frank. “Excuse me, this may seem like a really odd request, but would you mind pulling my head off?” She points to her head using Frank’s body below her neck.

“Come again?” asks Frank raising an eyebrow.

“Yeah, trust me. Just pull it right off, please – like yanking a mannequin’s head off.”

Sure enough, Frank, who still has Jan’s body stands up and gingerly grabs the sides of Jan’s head. He slowly twists her head back and forth and pulls off Jan’s head and it pop’s right off Frank’s body, which falls lifelessly to the floor.

“What the hell?!” he screams in shock! “Is my body okay?”

Jim is freaking out as well causing some attention from the coffee shop as some people flee in panic, others gather around to see what he commotion is all about, and some ignore the whole situation engrossed in their MP3 players and laptops to notice anything going on.

“Don’t worry, it’s fine. Now go ahead and give my head to Sarah here and then sit down so you can pull your head off and place my head back on my body.” Says Jan rather nonchalantly.

“How the heck is this possible?” says Frank nervously as he hands Jan’s head over to Sarah.

“I think it’s based on our bodies. Only a special few can do it, so go ahead and switch us back.” Says Jan.

“Really? This works with anyone?” asks a bewildered Frank in disbelief.

He reaches over and grabs his friend’s Jim’s head and pulls it off. “Hey!” he screams and his body collapses across the table. Frank turns and grabs one of the waitresses pulling her head off, having her drop a pitcher of water. Then Frank switches their heads. “Whoa! That’s cool!”

“What the hell?” Screams Jim as he’s awkwardly wearing the apron, dress and heels of the pretty, shapely, waitress.

“Ahh! My body! What happened?!” screams the waitress, now with Jim’s body.

Then Frank grabs two people who are bystanders witnessing the whole incident and swap their heads as well. A male businessman in a 3-piece suit’s head is now on an elderly woman’s body in a blouse and slacks and vice versa.

“This is great! Such power!” says Frank looking at his hands with a sinister grin on his face.

Jan asks, “uh, sir? Would you mind giving me my body back now?”

Frank grabs Jan’s head and plops it onto a headless mannequin wearing a black French maid's outfit that was stationed near the patio entrance of the coffee shop.

“No way! This is incredible! Your body is MINE now!” laughs Frank.

“WHAT?!” shrieks Jan who can’t move.

Jim screams with the waitress’ body, “Change me back, now you asshole!” He tries jumping Frank but is not used to this new body as well as the high heels she wears, and Frank easily dodges him.

Frank reaches down and grabs his wallet from his decapitated body and avoids all of the people trying to grab him. To escape, he removes some heads and switches people around to disorient them.

“Didn’t see this one coming.” Says Sarah in shock.

“No. This day is just getting worse and worse,” sighs Jan on the mannequin.

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