by tom darcenn
Lisa is always making your life sad by treating you like a baby but justice will soon come
|02/28/14: Okay Chapter six hundred is reached. Wow, I never expected it to get this far, but it has. And thank you to every other user who ever contributed.|
I would to draw your attention to this new story, which although I created really belongs to the User MANatee. Please view: http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1974495-Revenge-is-a-Dish-Best-Serv...
I'm also now offering a two hundered and fifty Gift points in return for reviews or rankings. Be they good or bad ones, if there good, then they increase this stories reputation, if there bad, they will tell me whats wrong with the story, and I will attempt to correct it, please leave personal bias out of this. And add add add.
Your name is Matthew Jameson,
You are fourteen years old,
You are the same as every other fourteen year old boy,
But you have a problem, a big a problem, a very big problem, a problem that stands a 6 foot 3 inches tall to be exact,
and this problems name is Lisa.
The problem is your seventeen year old sister,
what is the problem with her you may ask?
Well she is always treating you like a baby in front of people, not becase she cares or anything, no she just does it to embarress you and annoy you.
But your Day of Reckoning will soon arrive, due to that device you found on the beach you now have the power to limitly warp reality to your will.
she treated you like a baby know its her turn...
The rules for this story are:
No Insulting Any Religon
No Killing Charecters (only I can do that)
No Replacing Charecters (you can add new ones though)
No Obvious Spoofing Other Storys (what can I say, I just don't like spoofs, homeges are fine though)
No Adding Something To Unexpected, like suddenly changing the sections plot completly in one chapter, you can change the sections plot but do it graduly.
On one other note, to avoid any further confusion, the devise is not like a lazer or a remote, its more like a chip in his brain alowing to alter reality to a point.
Here are the over authors who have made there aditions to my story:
CreepyCrawly, 24 excellent chapters and two even better ones, personally my favoute author and I would be thrilled if he continued adding to my work as I love his. Also the one who added chapter 200. And officially the best.
Chet Hatton, 5 excelent stories from a great author
Kona, Eleven great chapters and two excelent chapters
big bubba, three okay, seventeen good and eight very good chapters (Including Chapter 300)
Youngest Led Zepplin Fan, twenty good chapters (Including Chapter 500), aswelll fifteen okay chapters and four other chapters
kitty3, 2 intresting chapters
Jake, five very good chapters and two good ones
Lewok, two very good, twelve good chapters, three okay, three option and three other chapters
elek, one okay, eight good, two very good and eighteen option chapters
MANatee, eight good, Twelve okay, Twenty Eight option and nine chapters
Whippet Wild, two good, four very good and one okay chapters
Skarp, one great chapter, one good, two option and six okay ones
leafy, Two very good, two good, one okay and one opption chapters
jackrssss, Two very good but a bit out of place chapters and one good one
eaten-cabinet, six good chapters, five okay one's and four option chapters
Yugi, three very good chapter, three good and seven option chapters
🐗ing, two good, eight okay and four option chapters
mystic1324, twelve okay and five good chapters
Scifiwizard, two good and one very good chapters
Jack999, 2 good chapters, one okay one and two other ones that I shall not mention
L-P 2, one good and one very good chapter
hieveryone, three good chapters and four okay ones.
BubbaTrueBlood, three good chapters
iAnimeYou, six okay chapters and one option
crabula290e, two good chapter and three okay chapters
diaper boy, Two good, two okay and one option chapter
Mr. Met, one very good chapter
not_original, two good chapters
PsycoEd, one good, one okay, and two option chapters
happysmile111, one okay and one good chapter
Fred Hayes, two okay chapters and one chapter
PsychoticBread, one good chapter
Tom, one good chapter
Plusi, one good chapter
aspire5335, two okay chapters
Game Master, one good chapter
jerry lightbrad, one good chapter
Grimwar, two okay and one option chapter
SSPP, two okay chapters
Gibson, three chapters and one okay one
Spuffyromy, Three chapters and okay chapter
Gage, one okay chapter
Bunny, one okay chapter
Reoli, one okay chapter
Kix, one okay chapter
Tristen, one okay chapter
Sky Watch, one okay chapter
DDD, one okay chapter
Blueyes, one okay chapter
CommanderX, one okay chapter
btwbtt, one okay chapter
Jeremy, one chapter
spaner, 7 ... amusing chapters
Cole, two option chapters
THEBOSS, Two chapters
Mysterious_Guy58, one option chapter
AReallydecentwriter, one option chapter
Kameron, one option chapter
ArchAngelDragon, one option, and one chapter
Sharzai, one chapter
Diapers_Are_Hot, one chapter
Alavanderpj, one chapter
God of books, one chapter
Here are the ones who helpped my work, Just add if you want your name up there to.
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