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Chapter #17

What a Tangled Web

    by: Unknown
You find yourself in a Disney universe, at the foot of a tall tower in a secluded wooded area. You know where you are almost immediately and decide to assume the form of the vain Mother Gothel with your tech. "Rapunzel, let down your hair! The trademark hair soon appears and you climb up to face the secret princess in under a few minutes. You listen to her request to see "the floating lights" and an idea forms in your head. "Very well dear, I'll let you go. But first, you must do something for me." This causes Rapunzel's eyes to go wide with joy and it almost scares you.

"Anything! I'll do anything you want Mother, just name it!" "Burp." "What?" "Burp, as loud as you possibly can." Rapunzel raises an eyebrow, "That's it?' You nod.

Rapunzel thumps her chest with her fist and lets out a pretty nice belch. You've heard better though and decide to tease her a bit. "I dunno. That doesn't sound like someone who really wants to see the floating lights." "I can do better!" Rapunzel yelps in desperation. She sucks in and rips a thick, meaty belch. "BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURP!"

You wave the smell away and gaze deep into Rapuzel's pleading eyes. You want to say "yes" but you feel a twisted sort of pleasure at the idea of continuing to taunt her. You wonder if assuming a villain's form has affected your morality in some way. "Sorry dear, but you just can't seem to burp as good as me." You let out a belch of your own, topping her by only the slightest margin. The secret Princess looks utterly heartbroken and a dark part of yourself you never knew existed loves it Then Rapunzel's eyes harden and her face takes on a look that is equal parts anger and steely determination. It actually frightens you.

She sucks in and her belly expands quite a bit. It stays this way for a solid three minutes until...."BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURP!!!" The sheer magnitude of the burp shakes the entire tower and you find yourself literally blown away, crashing to the ground in a heap. You're forced back to your normal form on imapact and make a mental note to avoid taunting candidates in the future. You're about to try standing when you see a large shadow fast falling towards you from above. Your horror grows once you realize it's the tower itself, torn from it's foundation by Rapunzel's powerful erruction. "Oh, crap." You hastily get set to teleport away, angered by the fact that you lost your first recruit. You know now that you'll have to plan such tests more carefully if you wants your plans to succeed. You reappear in...


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