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Rated: E · Interactive · Action/Adventure · #2141885

You shrink near girls. (300 Word Minimum.)

This choice: You accept it to get out of the snow  •  Go Back...
Chapter #54

Deer, Be My Servant

    by: Lover Of All Giantesses Author IconMail Icon
She called you a servant, with a big smile on her face as she was sure you were going to adore the new title. Who wouldn't want to fawn over a deerfolk like her, she was perfection personified. She has endless suitors, she was the Champion of the Tundra after all! Maybe even Foenum itself.

As for you, you were confused. "Uh... V-Velvet, why do you want me as a servant?" You ask her.

"Vhy, vell I need someone to dot over me. My previous Winter Sprite quit on me, and the position is over. I zhought you would be jumping in joy after zhis?" She seemed confused as well.

"I-I want to get home, I want to return to my normal size. I-I don't... really want to be your servant," She wasn't too happy with that answer. "But... if you can take me back to your home, out of this cold forest that would be great." You were filled with fear and running but now, you realized how cold it was!

And this was where Velvet will strike. "Hmm, I suppose I could take you back to my city, and house you... give you some food and beverages."

"Thank you Velvet, s-"

"If you vere my servant~" She smirked at you. "I vould do zat for my servant?" She was chiming cheekily at you, and she knows that she has you. You were shivering after all and if you stay out here, it was going to get worse.

"You are... making sure I don't have a choice. You are a very clever deer." She seemed very happy with that compliment that you gave her. She had a smug look. "I guess... I will be your... servant?"

"Oh how Vonderful!" She smiled wide. "Now, climb onto my back little human, I will take us back to my home." You obviously didn't want to be a freaking servant, but you also don't have much choice. Plus she did save your life... you owed something to her.

So you move over to the smart deer and climb from the snow and onto her body. Grabbing her fur and scaling her side as she waited.

"Zhis will be perfect~ Are you ready to serve me, like I'm the only one zhat matters~" She seemed happily saying this, as she stood up. On her back, you positioned yourself on the middle. She turned her neck and looked at you saddling her.

"I-I guess... can we just please get somewhere warm first, before we lay out the plans Velvet."

She had no problem with that, as she began to trot. She came out here to find a new servant, and she has found one! It wasn't a Winter Sprite, and may not have all the powers that they have, however... she will be the only deerfolk with a little human as her property, and that alone made you worth it. She's one of a kind, so it would be fair that her little one would also be one of a kind.

As for you, as soon as you got on top of her back and felt her fur... you dropped down and laid on it. It was so cold, and this fur... perfectly taken care of, perfectly cut... so warm, so perfect. She noticed this, as she smiled to herself.

"You are quite lucky to find fur as beautiful as mine~"

"You got... quite the ego, don't you Velvet?"

"Ego, me?" She questioned. "I simply don't understand. Vould you accuse a tree of being green, or of the wind blowing. I am beautiful, and I claim I am beautiful, vhat is so wrong about that?" She teased and... you got a smile. She's so full of herself but it somehow flips around right back to being charming. Plus her fur is so soft... you were loving it.

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The giantess deer got to her home, passing through the large door and walking down the street to her home. You were able to see this place, and you were stunned.

It was a city of deers, with large wooden homes, large stone walls around the city, and... weird creatures following around the deers, serving them and other stuff.

"This place is weird." You say from her fur.

"Stay down for now, I vound not want you taken~" She chimed and you listened to Velvet. She moved to her home, a large wooden house with multiple stories.

"D-Do you live here with someone else?"

"No, and I'm sorry I know it's small." She remarked. "I asked to own the castle itself, and zhey said no. The nerve, to the Champion of zhe Tundra no less."

"W-What does that even mean?" She got inside, walking inside as she moved over to her couch. Sitting down and... it was a couch built for four legged things, so it was low and had room for her to sit comfortably.

"Disembark now." She ordered and you did just that, stepping to the side and walking in front of her face.

"Warm in here... thank goodness."

"I know~ My previous Sprite took good care of zhis home, and of me. Now it's up to you do zhat as vell~ You are to clean my home, get the fire going, tuck me in at night, clean my fur, scrub my hooves, feed me my Golden Oats, shower me in compliments, apply my makeup, carry my belongings, cut my hair, d-"

"D-Do you do anything yourself Velvet?" You were stunned, how many jobs is she giving you.

"Vhy Vould I? When I have someone lesser than me to do it for me."

"Lesser?"

"Oh! Right sorry. I forgot sometimes how zhe truth could hurt others." She framed that as an apology of calling you Lesser, but not really taking back her words.

"Okay... well, what do you want me to do now?"

"Eager?" She asked, with a smile growing on her face.

"You saved my life... I guess I feel like I have to thank you for it."

What happens next?

You have the following choices:

1. You give her a pedicure

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2. She only wishes to meet you now

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3. She opens her mouth and tells you to get in

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