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Spring is here...  [E] Sweet smelling flowers peek through... (An Acrostic poem on Spring)  |
| (5.0)  Greetings Jilu! It's been a really long time, how are you?  A review from "Invalid Item" The following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item. If you disagree with any of the suggestions below, feel free to ignore them. I am not a perfect writer myself but "Practise makes a man perfect" neither I want to make you depress or angry, so Write On!  TITLE/THEME: The title of the poem is very interesting. I loved the title and I am willing to read any season's poetry especially the spring and winter poems and I am lucky to have seen the title and dropped by The poem suits the theme and the theme suits the title. Well done! Spring is here do reveal to the reader that it is about spring but the thing I love about season's poem is that the theme is the same, the content in the poem is unique, each beautiful and exuberant in it's own way  FLOW: The flow of the poem was extremely good! there was not even a single interruption and the reader could read the poem very smoothly! Lovely! EMOTION AND WORDING: The vocabulary you used in your poetry in very strong and really good enough for the reader to vividly see everything and visual the scenery perfectly! Although I have never experienced such scene in real life but I can always imagine in my mind and love the image I have!  Great job! SUGGESTIONS AND TYPOS: None that I could find. Perfect!   FAVOURITE STANZA : Well, I loved the whole poem, the idea is really lovely and nice, I like the way you added the appealing touch of colours and the poem itself looks very neat and organised and I love your poem's appearance! OVERALL RATING AND IMPRESSION: I am so glad to read this! truly inspired and joyed! I really loved the flow and the vocabulary you used to help the reader visualize!Thank you for allowing me to read and review your poem. Write On! Take care and Have a great day! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** Check out these WONDERFUL activity! "Invalid Item" by A Guest Visitor "Shadows and Light Poetry Contest" by Choconut  "~ The Poet's Place Cafe~" by Dave's trying to catch up  "Invalid Item" by A Guest Visitor "Invalid Item" by A Guest Visitor "Invalid Item" by A Guest Visitor
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