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 |  | In The Heart  [E] The heart tells who we really are.  |
| (4.5)  Greetings! A review from "Invalid Item" The following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item. If you disagree with any of the suggestions below, feel free to ignore them. I am not a perfect writer myself but "Practise makes a man perfect" neither I want to make you depress or angry, so Write On!  This is a truly inspiring peace! I wrote a poem on the same theme, I look inside hearts of people, what they are inside, and the title was You are beautiful yourself. It is true that many people get insulted and then they are forced to be someone, mimic someone and their true self is lost. I loved your theme and the brief description and that is the major factor that drove me here to read and rate this poem. Excellent! The flow was good with nice choice of words as the reader can imagine how it must be and can relate to many instances in daily life. Thank you! There were no errors that I could find.   Thank you for allowing me to read and review your poem. Write On! Take care and Have a great day! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** Check out these WONDERFUL activity! "Invalid Item" by A Guest Visitor "Shadows and Light Poetry Contest" by Choconut  "~ The Poet's Place Cafe~" by Dave's trying to catch up  "Invalid Item" by A Guest Visitor "Invalid Item" by A Guest Visitor "Invalid Item" by A Guest Visitor
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