This is a very nice story with an unexpected ending. I also like the first part where the cat licked its lips for the fish. I saw that the story was written from different points of view. The first part is from a cat's.

I'm not sure about the second part. I'm also wondering which meal :The meal lasted a long time.

Then there's Jill's view and Cythia's view at the end. I was surprised that Jill ate them and was terrified that she ended up with a male voice. This needs a little elaboration. Why the male voice?

Other than that, I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing and hope you will extend it.

** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .