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A poem about a stranger walking to your house and getting himself comfortable after which he tortures you to death. I haven't read thrillers like these in a short poem. It was more to the disturbing side though. Well written and you brought shivers down my spine too.

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A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

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