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 Desire  Open in new Window. [18+]
This item was inspired by a friend that was to afraid to tell a girl how he felt.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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A beautiful monologue to the propose to the girl of your dreams. Very intense with feeling and desire,however I wouldn't be sure to say this to a girl. She may be a lot shocked with all the deep stuff from your soul but who know she might like that your poetic or something. Well written.

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I am giving it 5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!


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