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A beautiful poem about the separation between two lovers and the love and pain they share in words. The poem starts with the words of one attracting the other and then there came an end. I would like to suggest to reduce the extra lines in the beginning and the end of the poem. The rhyme and rhythm scheme is also good. Well written.

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I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!


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